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End of day
Photo Information
Copyright: JOSE MOUCHE (jmouche) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 33 W: 0 N: 0] (77)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09
Categories: Nocturnal
Camera: Minolta Dimage Z1
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-09-16 9:53
Viewed: 850
Points: 36
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Jose,

I like this photo very much, a great entry. I hope you don't mind, I did a workshop on this to level the horizon which was running just slightly to the left. Take a look and let me know if you approve.

GT

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  • mugush Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 477 W: 48 N: 164] (1728)
  • [2005-09-16 17:50]

Amazing shot! nice work done! good timing,, I like it
Love
Mugush

Tu commences à courir dans la cour des grands !
Magnifique, reposant, belles teintes, le top.
Félicitations.

Hello. Great shot! I love this kind of work. Congratulations! Well done. :)

Hi Jose,
very nice catch of the sunset. I'd prefer less black area in the bottom though, and off centered sun. tfs

Marek

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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 914 W: 86 N: 718] (6786)
  • [2006-02-10 10:01]

Hi Jose

and welcome to TL. I am a sucker for sky shots and yours is a beauty. Great colour with wonderful cloud movement going on up there. Well done and thnx for sharing this with us all.

SF.

Jose, it reminds me of a reggae song, “work all day in the burning sun, evening comes gotta get some fun”. Would write more but I have to chuck my portable in the bag and dash for the airport. Nice photo, and cheers G

Excellent capture Jose. The colours are awesome and I like the oblique lines.

Joe

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4270 W: 414 N: 6846] (42784)
  • [2006-03-25 9:12]

Bonjour JOSE

A fantastic sunset with marvellous colors & good reflections in the water. I like the central swirls. Bon travail!

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  • logon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 152 W: 10 N: 4] (1082)
  • [2006-03-27 8:47]

A most beautiful sunset, i like it too!
The water lines make the difference between a normal sunset shot and this.
Giuseppe.

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1595 W: 132 N: 2269] (20613)
  • [2006-05-23 20:39]

Very nice sky Jose, good exposure and very sharp. Thanks.

Mario

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  • amm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 227 W: 29 N: 86] (634)
  • [2006-09-30 9:55]
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Bonjour José,
J'aime bien cette photo pleine d'ambiance. Les mouvements dans le ciel sont originaux et inhabituels, c'est chouette de les avoir captés! Juste un petit bémol, la surface sombre au bas de la photo est un peu trop grande mais ce n'est que mon avis.
Bon dimanche,
amm

beautiful sunset..nice colors..TFS
Donna :o)

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  • drum Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 119 W: 45 N: 22] (625)
  • [2006-10-26 12:06]

nice colors
the cloud's shape and the lines formed by the waves give to your work that extra wich makes it special
maybe, however, a diferent crop would work better
and a litle twist in the horizont line

regards

Beautiful clasic sunset. Huts give a great perspective.

Nicely captured sunset. A little tilted on the horizon but it was already pointed out. I would crop very tightly to the shore and eliminate those rows of white structures.

Katya

This is the perfect end way of the day..Great tones and nicelly captured!!

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1320 W: 31 N: 1634] (9994)
  • [2007-12-01 11:10]

Hi Jose

Lovely sunset. I like the light hitting the waves. Gorgeous colours.

TFS

Karan

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1366 W: 0 N: 2686] (21373)
  • [2008-09-12 5:04]

Hello,

mangigique ce ciel, quel couleur, quels reflets sur l'eau, cet ces dessins que font les nuage, fanmtastique.

Bravoe t amitié

Nicou

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