Practice Makes Perfect

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• persimon (2406)
• [2005-09-30 10:55]
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My borther and his family all take Tae Kwon Do. I think Sadie and I will once she's old enough. I like the angle, but I think it would work better if you were to crop the girl on the left out and the light at the top. That way the two fighters wouldn't be centered so much. You have a nice background with the window to the right, and you can barely see a reflection in the floor. This is a nice touch.

I posted a workshop on this one. Take a look at it, and tell me what you think.

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• silver (0)
• [2005-09-30 12:27]

Great job hannah! I don't like taking pictures of people usually, but knowing them, and fighting them makes it much easier! Only comment would be maybe try to get closer (zoom in more) so they take up more of the picture? Maybe try to get an expression as the kick is made?

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• erdna (5425)
• [2005-10-01 22:30]

It is a good shot but your composition can be improved by cropping it close so that areas that do not mean anything to the subject could be removed, like a big part of the ceiling, the people on the left side and part of the floor.

Andre'

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• M4tej (779)
• [2005-10-03 11:59]
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I like your shot Hannah!!!
You catch the moment.
Congrats.
MAtej
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I will try to do something in WS!!