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smoke with the red lip color


smoke with the red lip color
Photo Information
Copyright: zeynep yp (zeynep) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 68 W: 0 N: 31] (220)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09-30
Categories: Macro
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-09-30 5:47
Viewed: 993
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is my first macroshot:)
smoke... i don't smoke, but i like to took a picture of it...
I adjusted hue and saturation and i like the red color on b&w. i hope you'll like it, too.
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To reddevil: thanks..zeynep 1 10-07 15:34
To kingdragon: :)zeynep 1 10-05 15:09
To gtinatl: ..zeynep 1 10-05 09:53
To iso: thanks..zeynep 1 10-05 02:30
To recepyuksel: teşekkürler..zeynep 1 10-03 09:04
To onurdongel: tesekürler..zeynep 1 10-03 02:27
To persimon: :)zeynep 1 09-30 12:09
To nuria: selamzeynep 1 09-30 07:48
To eliferen: thanks...zeynep 1 09-30 07:36
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Hi Zeynep! Welcome to TL:)
Its so sharpen macro shot. You did a good PP work which makes your shot more attractive.
I like your title too:))
Elif

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  • nuria Silver Star Critiquer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 0] (216)
  • [2005-09-30 7:34]
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Selam.
ilginc bir yaklasim. Ama bi sorun var. Kirmiziya donusturme islemi, bazi gereksiz alanlari da kapsadigi icin orijinalite bozulmus. Sadece alan secip yapilsa daha efektif olurdu. Kadraj daha özenli olabilirdi. Denemeye deger.
Tebrikler.

WELCOME!!! This is a great macro. The color w/ B&W works very well. Your textures are amazing. Well done.

merhabalar Zeynep Hanım,
hoşgeldiniz tl ye.. güzel bir makro çalışması bence , komposizyon güzel..ellerinize saglık..tebrikler

Onur

TE ye hoşgeldin. Burası ilginç ve güzel bir yer. İnsan kendini çok hızlı geliştirebiliyor, tahmin ediyorum sizin için de öyle olacak. Yaptığınız kritik ile farkınıza vardım, teşekkürler...
Fotoğrafınızda ortadai sigara tam içilmeden yanmaya terkedilmiş sanırım, yalnız o olsaydı tükenişin fotosu olurdu kanımca; hem insanın hem de tütünün...
Selam ve sevgiler...

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27941)
  • [2005-10-04 16:25]
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You started strongly Zeynep with an excellent macro. I said excellent because it's almost sharp all the way, for a macro not obvious. Good luck and welcome among us.

Michel.

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  • fer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 791 W: 131 N: 909] (8073)
  • [2005-10-05 5:52]

Hi Zeynep,

Great macro!Great idea,colors and detail.
Obrigado,
Fernando

Great first shot, wonderful macro with good textures.

Welcome!

GT

Creative more than I expected
Who can think that it's an ordinary cigar ??

The emtiness @ the bottom of the pix may take away the consantration

The contrary of the colours work very well

I don't like cigarettes but this composition is good because ugliness of it ;-) I hope you understand me.

Jos

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