Bar Stools

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• Manu_b (220)
• [2005-10-10 9:43]
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The idea is nice, but...
with this speed (1/8s) you should use a pod or something to hold your camera stable, or try with a higher speed if possible (can you open more than f/3.2 ? or with a higher sensibility)
and the main subject is cut (missing the lower end of the barstools). Try a different focal length or different angle.

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• persimon (2406)
• [2005-10-10 13:52]

Just a few critiques on this one. First of all, the subject is great with lots of potential. You have metal and wood (background) which gives us varied texture. You also have that bit of teal reflected in the chairs. Very nice touch. Now, the hings that I would do differently - Move out and to your left, so you will have both stools in the frame while keeping the one stool out front. Use a tripod or a higher film speed to reduce camera shake. I still give you points for the concept.

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• Peeotr (2307)
• [2005-10-10 15:10]
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I wouldn't estimati it so severe as Manu_b, but anyway it looks in a not very decided way. I think it lacks something - a main means. I did a workshop and tried to find it - in color.

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• garethgar (682)
• [2005-10-13 14:07]

Great capture. At first glance on the thumbnail I thought they were glasses!

take care

Gareth