the pink skirt

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• richardj7 (582)
• [2005-10-11 19:39]
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This photo contains a lot of information: men on the left looking at something, pumpkins, girl bending down to her left leg, "Open" sign, parking meter, washed-out menu...:) You have various choices for cropping and concentrating on on aspect of the photo. What, in my humble opinion that does not help the photo, is the large pink frame, and outside frame. It's a bit too much. Maybe a thinner frame, if you want one, to give a hint of pink. This photo could work if your intent was to show a mix-match of non-related information, unless the girl works there, and is taking a break.:)

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• jinju (80)
• [2005-10-11 20:29]

Too much stuff.

The photo is too small. and because you have so much stuff, the woman is tiny. Crop the useless stuff, show us more of the woman.

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• Shutter2Think (0)
• [2005-10-11 20:42]

Hi Skarlette,
Nice shot. You clicked during a good time, it shows her mood...doesn't look that happy. The composition is fine. I don't mind the business, as it kind of flows with how she might be tired on her feet from all the feeling of activity. I just would've preferred that you got her feet in the shot, though. Other than that, it seems fine to me.
Good work.
Richard