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Pocket Pan


Pocket Pan
Photo Information
Copyright: Bruce Jay (BruceJay) (4)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09-21
Categories: Decisive Moment, Experimental
Camera: Canon Powershot A75, Canon x0.7 Wide Converter WC-DC52, ISO-Auto Digital, No Filter
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-10-11 22:50
Viewed: 730
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello friends, this was taken 9 stories up at 4PM towards the sun without a filter. The original had some glare so I adjusted lighting a bit and also the sky was too white so I added some blue tint and made the grass closest to us greener. I liked the effect of squishing this Panorama so that it looks just a little surreal. Any critiques are welcome. Be brutal with me.
Thank You for checking it out :)

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To Shutter2Think: the dizzying blurBruceJay 1 10-18 16:15
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Hi Bruce,
Oh man, this one's a little hard to look at. It's got that wide angle distorted kind of feeling. The only thing that bugs me, personally, is the soft blur. But, I do like how you replaced your white sky with the blue, it's not a real cyan sky...but that adds to the surreal feeling. And then there's the extra skinny trees that adds to the surreal mood, too, so they both work towards that mood. Do like the greener grass, in front, it pops out...and I like the curve it makes. You did a good job removing the glare. Good work.
Richard

Good shot straight out of the movie 'Cat in the Hat!' It's a perfect metaphor on residential small-town America.

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