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feeding the ducks...


feeding the ducks...
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Copyright: jorrit van der molen (proxilva) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 34 W: 7 N: 6] (137)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2003-11
Categories: Portrait
Camera: leica R4, 50mm, Kodak TRI-X 400
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-07-23 13:41
Viewed: 1077
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
the eye of the beholder
throught a slice of bread
screwed this one up with developping
the film... but that's ambivalent with
experimenting
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Cool picture. The grain adds to the moody feeling. Perhaps if you cropped off the bottom and just had the bread it would be a more dramatic picture. If you hadn't told us what it was, I would have been stumped, not a clue how you achieved this look.

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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2004-07-24 0:53]

Very creative Jorrit. I like the outcom e of it, it is spooky in a way.

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