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Self-portrait 4


Self-portrait 4
Photo Information
Copyright: Agata Ornafa (eselu) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 2] (516)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-11-01
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/3.1, 1/30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-11-06 12:43
Viewed: 684
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi. It's me again. :)
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nice portrait Agata. (beautiful eyes ...)
Perfect lighting, nice sharpness;
A negative point: there is sth behind your head, which is disturbing. (could be easily removed with PS)
Congrat

swietne zdjecie. doskonala ostrosc. E.

Hi Agata, Beautiful self-portrait!!! Among the others I think this is the best so far :)) Sharp and clear with a nice reflection in your eyes!!
cheers
ToM

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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2005-11-07 13:36]

A nice portrait, your eyes are bright and sharp, very nice. B

my god, you are beautiful! I don't know if you should concentrate on being a photographer or a model! lol
Seriously. The photo is excellent. The lighting too. You are also a great model. beautiful eyes. Excellent job!! JP

Czesc Agata
Z calej Self serii ten portret podoba mi sie najbardziej. Bardzo ladna ostrosc, nie wiem czy dzialalas jakos w PS, ale tlo fajnie sie z Toba komponuje - tam gdzie jest Twoje ramie i policzek jest jasno, a tam gdzie ciemnie wlosy w tle jest ciemno (chociaz przyciemnilbym tam jeszcze bardziej, zeby nie bylo widac czegos co jest z tylu), to sprawia, ze uwaga koncentruje sie w srodku kadru. Oczy wyszly swietnie - super odbicie. Ladnie dobrana ramka.
Pozdrawiam
Wlodek

Agata,
The part in your hair is nice, your eyes, ears and everything about your face is cute. Good capture in Black & white. I think the composition and focus are perfect. Your eyes AND the shadow of your shoulder gives the photo good depth. Great job, keep posting these.there great!
Scott

Do you mind if I print this photo and put it in my wallet? Can show all my friends!
Lovely self portrait as always. perfect focus again, loev your pose and those eyes are looking into my soul - WOW!
TFS again.
jaco

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