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Copyright: Xav aka Sakana (xav) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 58 W: 27 N: 12] (409)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-07-23
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 300D, Canon EF 50mm f/1.8, JPEG 100 ISO
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): A Tribute To The Pretty Woman, HUMAN Expressions, Beautiful Women Portraits [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-08-02 10:12
Viewed: 2414
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
The photo original was slightly under-exposed. I worked with two copies, one completely in sepia over-exposed. And the other exposed well in sepia too. Filter clearness. The title corresponds to the expression of the face in my opinion.
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  • Great 
  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2004-08-02 10:24]

Excellent composition, the presentation is creative. The blown whites in the upper right corner are fairly distracting but do not diminish the model's expression.

Olá Xav,

Gosto bastante da composição. Além da espressão dela, a luz está espetacular e a composição 5*.

Very wel done

This is a lovely composition. The expression of the model is fantastic, just the right amount of mood amplified by the post processing.

Just the sort of picture I like.

  • Great 
  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2004-08-02 13:19]

This is just lovely. She has a beautifull expression on her face and your compo works well. I like the pp you have done with it. And you are right, your title works perfect fo rthis shot.

nice contemplatory shot Xav... i'm not to keen on the filter but overall very well done...

  • Great 
  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1339 W: 10 N: 29] (66)
  • [2004-08-02 14:55]

How romantic, your picture, Xav, soft and warm and a smooth light, very well done !

  • Great 
  • voyou (31)
  • [2004-08-02 15:08]

Belle utilisation du sépia et de post processing. Un beau moment bien capturé.

A lovely portrait. I think the overexposure worked in your favor in this case. It goes very well with the mood of this picture. TFS.

Très belle photo, l'effet sépia sur-ex est de toute beauté. Peut être un format carré permettrait de supprimer la partie droite qui attire mon regard...

  • Great 
  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2744 W: 370 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2004-08-03 13:55]
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A very beautiful portrait, Xav. The choice of using sepia here is excellent. Excellent sharpness of the model... my compliments on the PP. TFS.

Excellent portrait. Your pp is fine! Well done!

Very nice use of color, light and composition. I just did a WS in almost the same technique for repeated exercise. A very nice creation indeed. The overexposed sky above the girl gives a natural space. In overall the overexposed bits are in no way disturbing to me.

Well done!
Richard

I really enjoy your high key portrait work. This is a very nice example and I enjoy the sharpness... especially in the eyes.

Nicely done.

  • Great 
  • spike1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 507 W: 0 N: 464] (4321)
  • [2005-05-09 21:24]

Nice effect Xav. The mood of the photo is well-suited to the sepia colouring.

Interesting look. Try printing this on kodak endura metallic.

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