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Critiques [Translate]

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• delnaja (0)
• [2005-11-08 14:57]

I like the compo Zoe... the light as well... well done, TFS
Fred

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• tournesol (12862)
• [2005-11-08 20:46]

I really like this snapshot, Zoe! Great composition with a great diagonal, the street lights create a nice background, and the pose is excellent. Great job!

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• Tintin (1982)
• [2005-11-08 21:11]

Very nice picture, Zoe, and welcome to TL! I like your model's pose with his head resting on his shoulder like he is very tired. The lights in the background are just great. Well done!

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• jcandeli (3985)
• [2005-11-09 8:34]
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I love the lighting here. Reminds me of a scene from a movie. I love the blue lighting on the guy and the red lighting in the background. Also the DOF is very good. I wish I could see a little more of his head though. The cropping/framing seems a little off to me. Maybe if the eye and eyebrow were not cropped or even better, if you could include and ear it would not look off to me. But really it is a great shot. you captured the mood perfectly! JP

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• Sarah_Bear (45)
• [2005-11-30 23:50]
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I like the way Chris is standing there Zoe. I like the way the light is. He looks so gorgeous. I really like this picture and the way you focused in on him good work.

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• lucbus (10273)
• [2005-12-02 8:53]

Salut Zoe,
J'aime bien ta composition, très bien pensé l'eclairage donne aussi d'excellentes couleurs. Tres bien réussi.
Luc

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• LuciG (8681)
• [2005-12-10 20:17]
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Bonsoir Zoe!
Il me semble déjà avoir vu Chris dans une autre photo présente sur Tl. est-ce un ami en commun?
Ta photo est sublime! Tu as capturé toute l'expression dans ce portrait! de même que ton POV est bien intéressant qui nous introduit vérticalement dans la composition. L'arrière-plan est bien maitrisé et détient quelque touche de magie, c'est fabuleux!
Félicitations.
Luci

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• hampshiregirl (983)
• [2005-12-11 16:45]

This is an awesome picture. I really like the blurry background (those lights kick ass!) and shallow DOF. I don't think that the focus is bad. It could be better but nobody says that you have to focus on your model... You focused on his face and I think that it's a good thing. I also like the cropping. Good shot! Best wishes!

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• naturelo (1347)
• [2005-12-14 6:57]
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cadrage tres originale et bien rendu par toutes ces couleurs tres chaleureuse! BRAVO, beau shoot zoe.
elo

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• mark25 (4581)
• [2007-06-12 4:37]

hi zee,

why do people call you zoe? when your member id is doucez and your name is zee sta... ??

what i love about this photo is the fact that chris is not entirely visible in the frame... something you regreted.. but i certrainly dont... i dont know which camera you're using, what aperture, but what i do know is that you have quite a command over your style of photography, which is very essential as a part of skill building :)

i am impressed with your work and am sure that you will improve and make even better photos :)
chris has a great expression here, a lost, sad look...

thanks for sharing :)

muhammad muhsin