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In a snow covered landscape we travel on


In a snow covered landscape we travel on
Photo Information
Copyright: Jerry van Vliet (Tabasco) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 37 W: 1 N: 22] (290)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-03
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Ricoh SINGLEX II
Exposure: 30 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-11-11 3:58
Viewed: 1048
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
In een door sneeuw bedekt landschap betreden wij met langzame tred het bos

Gearmd en diep gelukkig
geflankeerd door een oude hond

Zijdelings schiet deze oude dame kwispelend de bosjes in
om daar achter te laten waarvoor we hier zijn

Lachend en spelend lopen wij onze ronde

Terugkerend, de snelweg passerend
nog verliefder dan we al waren
stralen onze ogen in het begin van de nacht

Hier houden wij halt

Ons gelukkig voelend
ademen we de verse smog tot diep in onze longen

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Vanaf de voetgangersbrug over de A28
camera op de grond gezet, draad onstspanner
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In a by snow covered landscape we enter with slow steps the forest

Arm in arm and deeply happy
flanked by an old dog

This old lady wagging her tale happily runs through the bushes laterally
there to leave behind for which we are here

Laughing and playing we walk our round

Returning, the motorway passing
more amorously than we already were
our eyes blink at the beginning of the night

Here we come to a halt

Our happy feeling
breathing the fresh smog deep into our lungs

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Taken from a pedestrianbrigde over motorway A28
placed the camera on the floor

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Hi Jerry,
I have a soft spot for road photography, I think it must be something about the lines and dwindling perspective? Here you give me both, very nice! I can see you're not driving your car here, that would be a BAD situation... Anyway, nice!
Regards,
Pablo -

  • Great 
  • jrj Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 162 W: 14 N: 82] (724)
  • [2005-11-14 7:31]

Interesting graphic job Jerry. Effectful with good use of lines and perspective

  • Needs Improvement 
  • bujin Gold Star Critiquer [C: 104 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-05-22 5:20]

Hi Jerry,

Je had dichter moeten worden,want foto's als deze zijn niet om aan te zien!

Sorry,

Jan van den Bos (Bujin)

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