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retromobile
Photo Information
Copyright: laurent crouzier (marmottelolo) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 186 W: 64 N: 109] (1011)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-10-29
Categories: Transportation, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: konica minolta z3
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): VINTAGE 900's PUBLICITY, red color in black and white photos [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-11-12 6:00
Viewed: 743
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
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Nice PS on this one!

Quel dommage que le cadrage soit raté :( La voiture est toute tassée sur la gauche, applatie par le cadre... Dans ce genre de photo, il faut laisser de l'espace devant.
Dommage, car la qualité technique est là, le passage en désaturation partielle est bien fait, le noir et blanc particulièrement bien réussi.

kenavo,

Jean-Marc

Beautiful picture, taste of cars
his work here was very good
I like this form, different
Congratulations

Sérgio

Hi Laurent, I like the 'retro' effect you've achieved. Very crisp, clear result, nicely composed.

  • Great 
  • brody Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 8] (64)
  • [2006-01-13 7:34]

very nice detail, just as the car. I wished you put also some details in the Photographers Notes portion.

brody

Hello Laurant...
Quite a bit of nostalgia here! And I think you do a proper post processing job to enhance the mood from times gone by! I like your composition... some will probably say you should give the car more room to move into, but the way I see it this one is at the end of the road!
Regards,
Pablo -

moi , si je devais voter !!! je dirai 2 points, car il faut voir l'originalité dans cette photo et non le coté professionnel. bien que je trouve que c' est une belle réussite
continu jeune homme
alain

laurent,
Nice B&W with selective color image.
I'd expect to see something like this in a nostalgic car magazine.
Good work.
Scott

Una bonita imagen de un viejo coupé norteamericano, lástima no indicas el modelo. La imagen es buena, pero la composición descentrada funcionaría mejor dejando espacio por delante del vehículo. Tu apellido en rojo apenas se ve sobre el asfalto. Convertir a B/N el fondo dejando el auto en intenso colorido mejora el efecto de la imagen, que de por si es algo mediocre.

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