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Fiston


Fiston
Photo Information
Copyright: Tony ARDINO (tony59) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 16 W: 8 N: 0] (117)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08-24
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Sony DSC P92
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): A Beautiful Child [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-11-16 16:43
Viewed: 703
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Je vous présent Antoine !
Eté 2004
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Hello Tony, this is such a cute portrait! Your model likes to pose and he is so proud of his sunglasses and with a good reason :)

Your photo is very well composed with a good close-up, very neat and sharp. The skin colour is very true.

Great work! Cheers, Yan

I found that picture very intesting but wanted to focus more on his face. Very cute boy! He seems happy and shy but confident!

Tip, always try to use the internal flash when the subject if facing the sun, this way, it will "eliminate" the shadows under his eyes... Or at least it should minimize it just a little to enchance the picture. Then you may not want that as it could create a light spot on the sunglasses but it worth to try :-)

TFS... Let me know if you like the workshop I did.

I really like the workshop treatment. This little guy now looks like a movie star.
Sharper and a frame can so enhance an image. Good and simple but a terrific difference. Good original to work from, of course.

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