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Dansing Queen


Dansing Queen
Photo Information
Copyright: Anna Stepien (stenia) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 46 W: 0 N: 5] (245)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-05
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Nikon F65, 35 mm
Exposure: f/8, 1/60 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-11-17 4:02
Viewed: 1057
Points: 15
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is my friend Agata. We call her Dansing Quenn, because she is the queen of life:).
This picture was taken in a studio, while the photo course I enrolled. Agata agreed to be my photomodel. I hope she likes it.
Sorry for the bad quality of the photo- that is the scanner :/ I did not improve the quality on PS.


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Really good use of space and like the composition very much. Looking out of frame is very effective. x

hi

nice portrait - hope you like my WS

martin

dobre podchidz pod stara fortografie ladna tonacja barwa i kadr przyjemne zdjeice

c'est une jolie photo qui manque juste un peu de netteté. mais elle est très bien prise je trouve! orginale le côté sombre que j'ai fait aussi sur une de mes photos que je proposerai a TL peu être...
merci

  • Great 
  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2005-12-05 20:39]

Hi Anna,
A very dramatic portrait. I like the way she is looking out on space. I like the dark area setting off her shirt collar and merging the rest into the background. She is indeed beautiful.
Is there a sharpness problem?
Salil

  • Good 
  • kavto Silver Star Critiquer [C: 15 W: 0 N: 0] (152)
  • [2006-01-27 6:32]

nice composition, good expression of the model, but lacks of focus.

regards,

  • Great 
  • jarkko (185)
  • [2006-03-12 17:25]

Hi Anna! I kind of like the roughness of this photo - I also like the model's expression. Model's name brought some memories to my mind, I once knew (as a teenager, at 80's) a girl from Poland, who was called Agata - so say hello to your model from me, just in case if she happens to be the same one.. ;)

See you,
Jarkko

Hi Anna,

This is a characterful portrayal of your friend. I loke the composition and you caught her gaze at just the right moment.

The quality issues with the image might even be a good thing. It adds an element of time.

TFS

Dirk

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