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Maxine


Maxine
Photo Information
Copyright: Loreen Smith (Loreen) (13)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11-12
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/1.25 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-11-19 16:20
Viewed: 585
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken of a lovely young lady as part of a class assignment for window light portrait.
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Loreen,

As sumptuous as anything. Absolutely great compo: two triangles (left elbow-right elbow-shoulder, and left elbow-right elbow-face) on the same base make this compo absolutely stabile, solid, even though the model is in the center. Very nice photo. Welcome to TrekLens!

Very nice pose, great subject. However, I would like to see fewer hot spots in the face & hands. 'minor'
Very hard to control, perhaps a soft curtain?

It looks like that your class assignment is very well done here, a real pro shot!

As Attila has said earlier, the composition is just great. Your model is well exposed and also the light are uniform and smooth.

I really like this one!!!

Beautiful model with a nice pose.

  • Great 
  • mugush Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 477 W: 48 N: 164] (1728)
  • [2007-05-16 20:17]

i love her eyes.. nice composition,
hey are you taking photography classes?? and did you get good marks/points on this assignment??
thanks for sharing
Welcome to treklens
best of luck here and there in class
love
mugush

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