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Big laugh
Photo Information
Copyright: Carmela Zmiric (Carma) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 129 N: 297] (4974)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-11-19
Categories: Daily Life, Humorous, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-11-21 8:01
Viewed: 471
Points: 15
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
She was in good mood!!!
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  • Great 
  • alark Gold Star Critiquer [C: 57 W: 3 N: 5] (52)
  • [2005-11-21 8:05]

great portrait Carmela. Very expressive!

"He" was in the good mood? I suppose it's Hanna, right? So... ;)
I'm glad mom was in the good mood too, so we have a good photo. Can't see whether it's been done with a new camera or not, but there seems to be a lack of sharpness here. You did a good work by sharpening her eyes (and mouth?) but the skin looks too smudged for me.
Overall composition is very good although tight, the moment you caught is priceless, but that skin texture...
C'mon, your standards are very high, so I know we will see much better work here soon ;)

Regards!
Petko

P.S. Sad već vidim ponovnu pljuvačinu od strane fanova :)))

  • Great 
  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 782 W: 3 N: 108] (2307)
  • [2005-11-21 8:57]

beautiful eyes!

dear Carmela,
i just eyes of clovestar's daughter Linda ..they was good expressed
but if we talking about mood and charcter of image, i'd prefer this one!
yes! its deep look and i love it!

regards
vik

  • Great 
  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2005-11-21 12:16]

A wonderfully happy image. Love the teeth ... B/W was a good choice.

  • Great 
  • btokaz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1060 W: 127 N: 167] (5744)
  • [2005-11-21 13:11]

Very nice portrait Carma. Good expression and bw tones...
Tomasz

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 746] (5421)
  • [2005-11-22 12:24]

I like this very informal photo and happy feeling.

Andre'

  • Great 
  • niner Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 222 W: 11 N: 0] (2068)
  • [2005-11-22 12:32]

nice soft focus, normaly i would remove sparkles from the eyes, but in this one just gives this nice balance to white teeths

I've been lokking at this for a couple of days now trying to make up my mind about it and I finally did. I like it. I had second thoughts because it has a certain snapshot quality. That's because of the smile (laugh) she gave (made) looks like a beautiful family moment. Then on the other hand the B&W suggests a "serious" photo with all the PP work done (bluring the cheeks). It's her innocent, childish smile that takes the cake and that's all ther is to it!! I don't know why I wrote all that c... before...

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