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Door


Door
Photo Information
Copyright: Chris Ryder (biblio) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 523 W: 6 N: 225] (2498)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11
Categories: Architecture, Artwork
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-11-27 8:11
Viewed: 604
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Part of a door at The Catherdral Church of SS Peter and Paul, Dyfrig, Teilo and Euddogwy, also the seat of the Bishop of Llandaff. The Cathedral lied close to the River Taff,it is surrounded by the bustle of Cardiff. I am not a great believer in organised religion, I do however find this a peaceful and a tranquil place to chill out.
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To pablominto: Much Betterbiblio 1 11-27 14:57
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Nice graphical shot, I like the diagonal here. The only bad point is that the line on the left is not parallel with the frame.

I am a TOTAL non-believer in organised religion but, like yourself, I find that these old buildings carry so many opportunities amongst their store of history.
Like Pablominto, I see the need to have this sharper and straightened, as the potential is there.
BTW, I have my roots alongside the River Taff. Pontypridd.
Gotta be honest with my rating ...

Hello Chris.Beautiful compositie of subject with colours, simplicity give rest and strongly.

Frans

Knights of the Round Table or Da Vinci Code?
Great shot Chris; it's just a little partr of the door, still you have several sorts of light captured.
Thanks Chris.
(and Pablo made a good workshop)
Huub

The use of the area colour and contrast are good. But in my opinion yoy have to sharp the door. And make it more vertical. To save me some word I make a WS
Ruud

Hi Chris,
I like the ornaments here! The texture and worn-off paintwork tell about old age... maybe some more punch, but then I'm a sharpness & contrast freak
Regards,
Pablo -

Chris - Just uploaded a workshop, have a look and let me know what you think!

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  • Josine Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 922 W: 21 N: 652] (4069)
  • [2005-11-29 13:46]

Hey Chris
Compaired with my church door,
this looks a like. I like it very much
Well done
Bye
Josine

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