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MY GIRL


MY GIRL
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Copyright: mati krimerman (matikrimerman) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 25] (341)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12-02
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 20D, Canon 70-200 /4 L
Exposure: f/4, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-12-02 15:26
Viewed: 1136
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
first at this too. home made portraits.

hope you'll like them or help me learn more about this .

you are welcomed to visit my website
WWW.MATIKRIMERMAN.COM
thank you

hope you'll like it

Mati


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I think it is very nice! Nice lighting and pretty girl. Great job! I can't see anything I would change. JP

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  • mugush Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 477 W: 48 N: 164] (1728)
  • [2005-12-02 16:30]

You took it beautifully!
very nice shot. full of creativity..
light's effect is very perfect,, in my openion picture is perfect so one can only praise this photo..
model is pretty...
thanks for sharing
Love
Mugush

I think your lighting is great, and I like the way you can only see one side of her face. You have achieved this look with lighting alone and no cropping. The nice texture of the pillow behind her head, the slight tilt of her face. Very nice photo.

Hi Mati,
Great shot. The lighting & compo is great also. The model looks very pretty as well. Nice job. Keep up the good work.
Regards,
Mohammadreza

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  • bult Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 24 N: 86] (1037)
  • [2005-12-02 18:29]

It's so weird how you sometimes recognize a younger version of someone you know in someone elses portrait... The minute I saw this one, it reminded me of a dutch writer.

O and by the way, nice shot ;)

I think you could help me! Beautifull use of light and all the details look so crisp. You even succeeded to capture that fragile gloss on her lips. Very nice angle and she looks absolutely straight in the camera. The final PP work resulted in a very nice portrait, good work!
See you again, Richard

hi Mati nice girls
good light and shadows
nice pleasure
great shot
regard

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  • samr Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 44 N: 433] (3323)
  • [2005-12-03 5:28]

Nice warm colour tone and light. Composition and POV are really great for this very nice portrait. Nicely done,
Sam

good job with the light and the colour mati!

I like the mood you conveyed here, other option would be putting a white reflector board on the shadow area will of course change the mood slightly, but its worth a try Mati. Well done.
Always be safe there and your love ones.

Jeffrey

Wonderful lighting, and cropping- I also like how the shadow engulfs half of her face... really interesting. What I find strikes out most in this image is her iris, the colours are so deep, and the circle of the iris almost seems like it's been beveled. Great photography Mati, I relaly like this. The freckles on her face is beautiful, very natural. Pretty woman. :)

TFS.

Biance.

I like the photos that you have taken~you have chose
the right sight~

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