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Copyright: luis pereira (lusitano) Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 29] (437)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-12-05 15:09
Viewed: 577
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 13
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New Bedford...the inspiration for Herman Melville's Moby Dick
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Olà Luis,
I like your shot very much, and especially the fact you chose not to center your subject but I think it should have been better not to cut him. Apart from this, I like the long shadow, the bird and the horizon ...
Parabéns
Sylvie

The composition is really pleasing, very calm. I like the long shadow. I am wondering where he is going, it's good to see images that make me think. Perhaps could be a little sharper.
Thanks,
Karen

Beautifuk and very moving Luis. Excellent work with light and shadow. Compositon very good. Full of mood.
Just a bit of noise in the sky. TFS
Kevin

Luis.

I love your composition. It has a very dramatic tone to it. I can almost hear Enio Moricone on the background. Have to agree with Sylvie thas it's a pitty a part of the person is cut of.

Anyway, it deserves a green one.
Regards,
Tom

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  • cafe Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 77 W: 0 N: 22] (1209)
  • [2005-12-05 19:03]

Great composition, very moody. It seems you crop off part of his body on purpose but include his full shadow to help the moody effect, it works I like it. TFS. Giap.

Daring cut - but I like it. Whole image is terrific. Is the image genuine?
I'm happy with the slightly soft/grainy effect.
I'm very happy with the cut.
Happy all round but NOT happy because I have run out of medals. I will return.

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 783 W: 3 N: 108] (2309)
  • [2005-12-17 9:10]
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but you are master of what you're doing on images, i'm real fan.
Thanx for sharing.serious.
Respect.
V

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