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• reddevil (0)
• [2005-12-15 14:56]
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Good photo artistic photo Burak...my compliments.

Jos

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• maleentjeh (66)
• [2005-12-15 15:50]

Hi Burak, great mood ! Yep, loneliness indeed, and the yucky feeling one gets standing alone on the platform.

Great photo !

Marleen

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• lukdm (1350)
• [2005-12-17 12:13]
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nice shot Burak

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• DAM (1110)
• [2005-12-19 19:29]
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This photo has so much potentia.... first of all you have great geometric on the background. Unfortunately, it is very blurry.
Try to tight up the picture with a bit of cropping. Get rid off the black underneath, and the bright lights on top. The woman's profile is perfect. It really reflects the loneliness of the traveller.

Enhance the colours a bit more, and you will see a better and more pleasent photograph. Good work and you are well on your way.

Thanks

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• ballyna (1914)
• [2005-12-21 3:25]
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burak,
bu fotoğrafını görünce şu makine işinde biraz acele etmeni yazmak istedim.burada sende o hamur olduğunu bizlere ispatlıyorsun,çok güzel gözlemlemiş ve fotoğrafı yakalamışsın fakat ekipman ancak bu kadarına izin vermiş,üzüldüm hakikaten.hem geometrik oluşumları güzel kullanmışsın kadrajda hem de bir atmosfer yaratmışsın,bizlere de ulaşan bir duygu yüklemişsin fotoğrafa.eğer ekipmanın sağlam olsaydı,bu kadraj bu yükü rahatlıkla kaldırırdı emin ol.kalitesiz bir dijitalle başlamaktansa ikinci el de olsa kaliteli bir manuel focus makineyi uygun şartlarda bulabilirsin gibime geliyor,
saygılar.

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• delnaja (0)
• [2005-12-29 6:27]
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I like this one because of the solitude that you show and the blur... Well done
Fred

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• cloverstar (0)
• [2006-01-03 6:15]
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I like this composition. The feeling of loneliness is there. I like that the woman is at the edge of the scene. I don't think the blur was needed on the floor Burak. That is only my choice, as you may like it a lot. I think sharpening the whole picture in this case would be best. The colours are good. Good work with your camera phone.

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• kavto (152)
• [2006-03-05 22:40]
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nice composition.

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• ArcapA (186)
• [2006-03-10 18:29]
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Another very succesful work. Nice composition, colors and pp work. Can't decide if I like the dark area on the bottom. For me, the grain what makes this photo moving. TFS. :)
Alp