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Water fight


Water fight
Photo Information
Copyright: arnie McNally (arnie) (33)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-14
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix S7000
Exposure: f/8, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-12-16 11:02
Viewed: 792
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Our Grandsons Nathan and Connor who are cousins enjoying a romp in the paddling pool in Beaumaris on the island of Anglesey North Wales.
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These children really look as though they are enjoying themselves. The inclusion of the lower half of somebody in the top left corner is distracting. I've done a workshop and hope you approve
Regards
Barry

While it's fine as a family photo, it really isnt that interesting a shot as photograph on it's own. The highlights are blown out and the framing is a little awkward (the square format you chose is very difficult to compose inherently, so you need to be sure when you use it).

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  • mell Silver Star Critiquer [C: 22 W: 2 N: 4] (435)
  • [2007-04-19 10:08]
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Hello Arnie,
Beautiful children and a goo job.
TFS.
Mell

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