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Waiting for Daddy
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| My focus is a little soft on this one, because I had to zoom from far off. I didn't want to disturb the little girl and change the look on her face. I had to crop the photo some too, and resize, which also took away some of the quality of the photo. She was sitting and watching her father who was fishing. He had told her to stay on the shore, and I don't think she was happy about that. I framed the photo the way I did in an attempt to capture the "aloneness" of the child. |
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I think you captured her emotion perfectly. I agree a little on the soft side for focus, but sometimes it happens. Have you tried sharpening it, as that may help. I like the crop and the sense of depth of field.
This would have been a perfect image if it had been sharp. Well seen, TFS!
Alli
Good photo. Good use of the area.
A small thin white line in the frame will help
Ruud
Send the points later
I like the composition and the soulful mood, the lighting on her face is lovely, just a bit too much noise in the image. Well done.
karen
Nice shot. We think the soft focus is nice and serves to, if anything enhance your shot. Well done. Happy New Year!!!!!
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