"Look at Your Game, Girl"

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Copyright: jorrit van der molen (proxilva) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 34 W: 7 N: 6] (137)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-03
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-08-19 16:07
Viewed: 846
Points: 8
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There's a time for living
Time keeps on flying
Think you're loving baby
But all your doing is crying

Can you feel
Are those feelings real
Look at your game, girl
Look at your game, girl

What a mad delusion
Living in that confusion
Frustration and doubt
Can you ever live without the game

The sad, sad game
Mad game
Just to say loves' not enough
If it can't be true
Oh, you can tell those lies baby but you're only fooling you

That's the game
Sad sad game
Mad game
Sad game
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"Look at Your Game, Girl" Copyright Guns N' Roses 1993
Copyright Charles Manson (1970, from the album entitled: Lie: The Love And Terror Cult)
From the album "The Spaghetti Incident" Released November 23rd 1993

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U look so pacien playing that game, i like B/W color that u have used here, i like your composition i would like to see more about the game and of course with u there. Nice work, Keep Going. =)

  • Great 
  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 578 W: 21 N: 1523] (11680)
  • [2004-08-19 20:08]

A nice meditative and intimate picture. Jorrit, the noise/grain is well conceived. I also like that you chose to present it in BW.

Nice angle. B&W works well here. The picture could be tilted a bit clockwise though.

such a good photo here... the presence of this girl is wonderfully taken... great.... keep on... keep on !

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