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Copyright: Gabriela Schimmer (schimmergabi) (206)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12-15
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/2.9, 30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-12-20 9:28
Viewed: 679
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I wanted to draw with the lines of a human body. What do you think?
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Ohhh tht's good. Nice to see a different interpretation of the nude (does this count as nude?). Personally I think I would either crop or burn the centre left edge as it seems a little too bright and distracts from the main image. Blimey it must be bright if it distracts me from that body LOL

Other than that I like this a lot.
Chris

Very good work, I have to admin that you have "stolen" my idea! :) I just draw the draft for the very similar shot the other day :))))
You did a very good work, you only might add some more contrast to make it look more like a drawing, or add more glow to create the opposite effect and make it look softer. But it is very good work even this way, congratulations!
Regards,
Robert

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  • lukdm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 381 W: 3 N: 21] (1350)
  • [2005-12-20 10:41]

nice artistic shot
original crop

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2005-12-20 12:07]

bravo, Gabi, foarte artistica si originala perspectiva! nota 10 cu felicitari!
anca

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  • kclai Silver Star Critiquer [C: 45 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-12-20 21:11]

Hi Gabriela
Well, pretty cool image with such artistic feeling.
But the image is too thin and tall.
Need to "recuperate" the size of the image to a proper presentable, isn't it.
Cool work, Gabriela.
Eric Lai

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