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snow was on time


snow was on time
Photo Information
Copyright: dalia fior (dalia) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 218 W: 0 N: 37] (608)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12-30
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Canon Digital Ixus 750
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-12-30 11:13
Viewed: 801
Points: 40
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Whitened roofs for Chritmas, it enhances the lines of cover-plates on old parisian buildings
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Hello Dalia
What a nice picture! Roofs are interesting (color and shapes) but I appreciate that you kept a bit of the street ant the man on the sidewalk provide more life to the pic.
TFS
Richard

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  • Eru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 4 N: 83] (2760)
  • [2005-12-30 11:26]
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Hello Dalia,

I like the POV of your photo, specially this piece of street in the right corner.
TFS!

Marc.

Joli aspect de Paris. Ensemble agréablement cahotique, avec un petit coin de rue qui nous ramène sur terre. J'ai fait un workshop pour le plaisir de jouer avec une aussi belle matière première.

Well seen and composed.

Beautiful play with lines and graphism in your capture from the Parisian roofs.I like the mood too.
Hermann

Beautiful!! This was so well seen! it looks like a painting now, any pp work? leaving a small part of the street seen was a great idea!
congrats!
Marija

Belle composition. J'aime l'effet de la lumière d'hiver, quand le ciel est gris et donne une intimité aux sujets photographiés.

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  • Saiz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 909 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-12-30 17:29]
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Bien belle composition, Dalia …
Les toits de Paris restent toujours un enchantement pour la prise de vue…
Et cette neige lui confère un petit rien de magique …
J'aime beaucoup la cassure avec le personnage sur la rue …
Antonio

Hi Dalia !
What a beautiful view on Paris roofs !!!
I like a lot the graphical aspect created by the snow and the roofs with a touch of colour given by the chimney pots !
Snow always creates magic except when in the towns it is quickly spoiled by cars traffic. By chosing to show it on the roofs, you kept it pure and white and it is such a silent and peaceful vision of Paris ...
Well done !!!
Sylvie

beautiful idea! the roofs of Paris and snow.... Well done
Hapy new year Dalia :)
Fred

Les toits de Paris, excellent sujet
ambiance cinématographique en même temps
la neige apporte un côté noir et blanc rétro sympathique
et la profondeur de champ qui laisse apparaître la rue en bas
donne une perspective très intéressante dans le cadre
bien vu Dalia
bonne année
Pierrot

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2006-01-01 12:36]
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Hi Dalia!
This is a freat picture because of the angle and the POV that you have choose! this also emphasizes the textures very well!
Congratulations!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Luci

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 783 W: 3 N: 108] (2309)
  • [2006-01-03 13:07]
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very very nice image, Dalia, love softness of snow.and the whole mood in there.
it's interesting to think where you're standing doing this shot. it is anothere highere house? or ..
very well done.
happy new year to you!
Viktorija

A typical shot of Paris, very far of the eiffel tower or some the other touristic places, but stil typical of Paris.
Bravo, welll seen.
Steph.

I think all from us who experience snow in winter, remember this atmosphere of slowly falling day, no wind, everythink seems to be just gray. Some people say - it's sad. Yea... but there is also a certain calm in it.

I think you captured this peaceful atmosphere. I did a workshop but to emphasize the mood, not the 'quality' :-) Best greetings. Piotr

Great shot Dalia. Black lines and snow - great graphical effect. Well seen...
Tomasz

this beauty has got so much atmosphere, a great comp, love all the lines and tones, WONDERFUL, thanx, M, (*_*)

Very nice shot Dalia, very well done! I like it a lot. I like the angle you took the picture.
Best regards
Guy

Tres belle vue des toits de Paris,
J'aurais été curieux de voir cette composition en noir et blanc !

Salutation Bernard L.

Aloys,
Zo is het allemaal begonnen met de bloempjes en de bijtjes hebben ze mij ooit verteld.
Ze staan er goed op. Al vind ik de achtergrond wat onrustig.
Er zijn twee mannieren om dit nog te verbeteren.
Kies in je bewerking programma local blur.
Of kopieer de foto naar een tweede laag en gausian blur de onderste. Hierna moet je de delen die je minder scherp wilt hebben uit gummen. Je kunt e onderlaag ook nog lichter en donkerder maken naar wens.

RuudBlok

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