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Temps Mort


Temps Mort
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Copyright: Alain Gregoire (LunaSun) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 140 W: 0 N: 0] (142)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-18
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/8, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): 50-59 points- Part 7 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-01-09 13:07
Viewed: 1116
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 68
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Premier Post et premiers essays avec le Photoshop!
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Hi Alain,
that's an interesting motive with warm and brilliant colours. Also very sharp, I can see the structur of the leaf very well. Good job, thanks.
A warm welcome here on TL, have a nice time, bye
Sabine - wishnugaruda

You're kidding. If this is your first try in Photoshop, you have done a great job. Or your photo was great to begin with. Or my French is porrer than I thought. :))

Welcome aboard, Alain! Excellent first post.

First welcome
Good start
Like the leave and his colours
Good use of the field
Ruud

J'ai été amusé par ta note pour la similitude inverse. Pour moi j'ai toujours été très mauvais en dessin. Mais je fais de la photo depuis l'an 2000 J'ai eu mon premier appareil au temps des fêtes pour le changement de millénaire. Quelle symbolique :) Et bien la photo a fini par améliorer un peu mon dessin. Rien de publiable mais je me rend bien compte que la perspective évolue. Peut-être que ton dessin t'aidera en photo aussi :)

En tout cas pour ce premier essaie, j'en aime bien la simplicité qui est présentée de facon intéressante! Je vois bien qu'il y a cadre, mais il y a aussi un jeu dans les tons qui semblent être plus chaud que l'original aurait été.
Bienvenue sur TL!

Welcome Alain!!
Congratulations on this first image! Great colors and shapes!
Felicitacion!
Angela

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  • Viking Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 63 N: 782] (4383)
  • [2006-01-10 12:45]

Great to see your first photo.
Almost professional. well done
Rob

Hello Alain...
Nice composition... Excellent texture in the leaf, good lighting and great colours too! Nice job...
Regards,
Pablo -

eh ben ... si mes premiers essais en PP étaient aussi réussis que celui-ci ....
très bon travail Alain :o)
ili

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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 75 N: 902] (7908)
  • [2006-01-11 15:39]

Welcome to TL & have a nice time.
Good start.
Mitra

Welcome Alain. Lovely textures and colours, excellent use of the light.
Regards
David
PS many thanks for your comments on Foggy Banks and Platypus

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  • diana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 208 W: 24 N: 94] (1115)
  • [2006-01-12 12:55]

Hi Alain!
the first try in Photoshop is great!the photo is very interesting!the colors are good and remember the time passing!the contrast is realy good, the leaf is beautiful!Congratulation!

regards
diana

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  • Victor Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 392 W: 29 N: 232] (3388)
  • [2006-01-14 13:14]

Welcome Alain!
Your first work is very nice, well done.
Best regards,
Victor

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  • elkab Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 72 W: 51 N: 41] (739)
  • [2006-01-18 13:50]

Nice picture, very artistic. Mystic light, nice colors.

regard
eb

Nice shot. Composition and framing are superb. Thanks for sharing !!!!

Bonjour Alain,

I suddenly felt warm! What an incredible first post and work in photoshop. The colours and light here are so rich and warm they can be felt. What a powerful image!!! Thanks for the feelings Alain and welcome to TL. Looking forward to more.

Peace and Love to you always!
Kevin

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2006-01-22 9:50]

Un joli post Alain!
Tu métrises bien les couleurs et tu crées une ambiance chaude.
Félicitations.
Luci

PS. Merci pour ton encouragement.

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2115 W: 92 N: 1856] (10317)
  • [2006-01-22 9:50]

Salut Alain,
C'est un excellent début et surtout pour une amateur de photoshop tu as su crée un excellent cadre à cette photo. J'aime bien cette lumière douce et le calme de cette photo avec de très belle couleurs et une excellente composition.
Bienvenu sur TL et au plaisir de voir tes prochaines photo.
Luc

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4257 W: 414 N: 6771] (42534)
  • [2006-01-29 8:24]

Bonjour Alain

I like the soft, silky texture, & lighting. Marvellous color & superb dof. Bon travail!

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  • Eru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 4 N: 83] (2760)
  • [2006-01-29 9:18]

Bonjour Alain,

Pour quelqu'un qui dit ne prendre que rarement l'appareil, ce premier essai est un essai réussi à 200%: composition et couleurs excellentes! Cette simple feuille morte a une belle seconde vie grâce à toi!
Maintenant que tu l'as pris, ne repose pas ton appareil et refait nous d'autres photos tout aussi excellentes!

Marc.

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  • samr Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 44 N: 433] (3323)
  • [2006-02-03 18:44]

Beautiful shot and great PP work Alain. Welcome to TL - and this is you first post - WOW - I am looking forward to viewing work. THanks for sharing, Sam

Hello Alain,
this is a beautiful macro ... good light, and very nice warm colours. Well done!
Greetings
guntram

Hello Alain,

Very nice photoshop product, well done!!

GT

Superb macro, Alain. The colors are heavenly.

Beautiful image
The colours and textures are fantastic
Great use of light

Nice work ;)

ohh this is ur first image...
wonderfull. congratulations for a good start !
beautiful colours. nice lighting.
liked ur framing also

good one
liked it

regards
sangeeth

Welcome Alain. This is a lovely first photo. The sharpness and colours are amazing. Excellent close up, and congratulations!

c'est une belle travaille
Christine.

Hi Alain,

Lovely presentaion and excellent detail showing the structure of the leaf. Also well done on the crop and lighting. Good work!

John

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  • Ejla Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 333 W: 13 N: 137] (2488)
  • [2006-04-08 18:54]

Hi, Alain!
Thank you very much for having visited my gallery!
Welcome to TL!
Beautiful presentation!
I like the softenes of your photo!

Great composition Alain. Beautiful colors and mood, great background to. Very well done...
Tomasz

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  • pranab Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 734 W: 0 N: 537] (3141)
  • [2006-04-14 21:01]

alain,
ggod colro and very good use of light. good focus and i like the abstract theme in this shot.

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-04-27 11:01]

Salut Alain!
Premierement j'ai voulu ecrire que je ne vois ici la mort... mais apres, j'ai compris! c'est pas la morte, mais c'est l'eternite, le fin (morte) du temps... beau lumiere! bravo!

tfs
anca

quel étrange végétal! Luminosité sublîme, bravo.

This is a really wonderful macro. The softness combined with the detail is impressive. I also like the lighting, I feel as though I am deep in some dark enchanted forest.

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  • zou Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 52 W: 36 N: 0] (259)
  • [2006-06-17 9:54]

j'aime bien le couelur, soft et on dirait plus tableau de dessin ;-)
bravo

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Zou

C'est une très belle prise de vue. Cela rappelle l'automne indien typique pour le canada.
Joli travail.

Melissa

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