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Photo Information
Copyright: Piotr Gruszka (Gruchap6) (519)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-07
Exposure: f/3.1, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-01-10 4:30
Viewed: 771
Points: 29
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Polish]
Moj pierwsze tutaj ;D witam wszystkich.
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Great portrait....no note

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  • woody Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 193 W: 61 N: 141] (706)
  • [2006-01-10 4:39]

Hello Piotr,
Excellemt work! The model is indeed beautiful, the eyes and the mild smile are very warm and stand out.
Welcome to TL.
Regards.
Varun.

Look deep into the eyes of this model and find out distrust because mood of her eye lids does'nt match with her smile....

Beautiful lady and nice soft focus shot. Her eyes lack depth though like you are looking through glass.

Witam na TL.
Ładny portret - nie ma co mówic. Myśle, że jeszcze ciekawsza byłaby wersja czarno-biała...
Pozdrawiam
Tomek

Nice work, Piotr
TFS
v.

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  • OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 193 W: 71 N: 334] (2335)
  • [2006-01-10 5:36]

Welcome to TL Piotr,
Very good first posting here. Beautiful woman with dito eyes. Maybe a frame around it would enhance the photo but that's personal.
Regards,
OWO

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  • PieM (960)
  • [2006-01-10 5:53]

witaj na TL :) skad ja znam ta modelke :)
a in inglisz to bedzie jakoś - welcome to TL. Do I know her ? :)))

Wolcome, Very good start :) I like your tight crop.

Woooooooooooooow!
Very beautiful portrait!
Pretty woman!

TFS,
Chris

With a beauty like this you're always welcomed. Beautifully done . I like the tight crop.

Excellent first post. Looks like the same girl photogrpahed recently by another newcomer at TL. Welcome to TL with this wonderful portrait, eyes are sharp, tones are good.
jaco

Hi Piotr,

Welcome! This is a real good start. It is a beauty.
De photo is real good with an excellent composition and very good colours and details.
Maybe a bit more space at the bottom and right site?
Also it is easy to remove the litle spots in here face.
I made for you a workshop to show it.
Last but not least gives us some more details in the note! Also please give me your feedback on my workshop!

Thanks,

Hendrik

PS I don't give any smileys any more.

pisalem na ik ladna modelka dobrze jej zrobiliscie we dwoje:D ladnie wychodzi na zdjeciach ale lepiej jej w b-w :) pozdrowienia

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  • GlenC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 142 W: 2 N: 99] (787)
  • [2006-01-14 10:34]

Stunning eyes Piotr... You've captured her beauty very well...

Glen

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  • jacobo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 699 W: 34 N: 678] (4869)
  • [2006-01-25 11:48]

Very good portrait.
I like her eyes. Very good portrait.
Regards.
Jacobo

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  • Quos Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 4] (183)
  • [2006-02-01 23:39]

Ladne ujecie....ladna kompozycja...ostrosc dobra....swiatlo dobre....dobry portret....2 punkty...Pozdrowienia dla mojego imiennika :)

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  • lobo Gold Star Critiquer [C: 73 W: 0 N: 0] (3)
  • [2006-02-02 17:13]

wszystkie inne masz w bw..czemu to 1 w kolorze?
powiem tak...swietnie pokazana ..ladna modelka...i o to chodzi...pozdroo

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  • zou Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 52 W: 36 N: 0] (259)
  • [2006-07-09 13:34]

I don't know if this portrait is great or the model who make it better :-P, but very nice shot :)
BRAVO

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Zou

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  • Arwen (94)
  • [2006-10-27 14:25]

Nice shot and a nice model. Well done

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