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Japan
Title: a wonder dome
a wonder dome (14)
AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 546 W: 32 N: 50] (6137)

cs3
cs3
MiKa2000 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 58 W: 78 N: 4] (1795) [2008-10-06 03:14:28] [1]
cs3 and neat image
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Japan
Title: stripes 3
stripes 3 (10)
AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 546 W: 32 N: 50] (6137)

PP
PP
Reflex Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 186 W: 33 N: 27] (991) [2008-10-03 02:55:05] [1]
just reframed
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Japan
Title: stripes
stripes (12)
AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 546 W: 32 N: 50] (6137)

crop out the top
crop out the top
jonathanhart Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1525 W: 236 N: 1246] (10620) [2008-10-01 04:02:29] [4]
reframed without sky: crop out the top
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Japan
Title: three roses
three roses (10)
AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 546 W: 32 N: 50] (6137)

Cropped to off-centre it
Cropped to off-centre it
Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3213 W: 225 N: 6913] (27433) [2008-09-14 00:42:20] [1]
All I did was crop around your rose - now it isn't so centred.
I also added a tiny 7 pixel black border to tidy it up
I hope you like it
Janice
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Japan
Title: rose
rose (14)
AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 546 W: 32 N: 50] (6137)

GIMP
GIMP
actagaudi Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 37 W: 17 N: 47] (201) [2008-09-10 04:58:49]
Just I have fun to work on this photo, I have lot of ideas, this is one of them.
Changes:
- crop,
- contrast,
- saturation,
- frame,
- sharpness.
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Japan
Title: swans and swan-boats
swans and swan-boats (16)
AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 546 W: 32 N: 50] (6137)

Composition & frame
Composition & frame
eyesthetix Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2217 W: 121 N: 1876] (7771) [2008-09-10 02:42:22] [2] [+]
Hi Akihisa,
As I looked at your image i thought it could be made to look more attractive.
I understand that we all have personal preferences - So you may call this my thought ;-)

Details (in Adobe PS) were:
1. Cropped out the top - to focus on the attractive area below.

2. USM + slight colour boost (personal preference here - i think colours in the original were okay).

3. Dark border :-)

Hope you like it
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Japan
Title: red rose
red rose (16)
AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 546 W: 32 N: 50] (6137)

Photoscape
Photoscape
terrileo70 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 81 W: 25 N: 166] (951) [2008-08-30 03:47:56] [1]
Lowered the gamma bright
Added contrast
Darkened
Cropped and cloned out the birghtness in the background.

Tracey
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Japan
Title: a morning glory
a morning glory (8)
AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 546 W: 32 N: 50] (6137)

Crop & edit
Crop & edit
tjutjut Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2006 W: 88 N: 3288] (15141) [2008-08-09 18:43:56]
Hi Akihisa san,

Hope you don't mind . .
I crop the image . . and remove some disturbing object . .
I am not the expert doing the edit . . but just to show you the composition that makes the flower stands out . .

Cheers,
Tjutjut
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Japan
Title: flowers field
flowers field (20)
AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 546 W: 32 N: 50] (6137)

rotation, adjusting of saturation
rotation, adjusting of saturation
Briddl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 148 W: 42 N: 120] (507) [2008-07-27 06:08:27] [3]
Hello Akihisa,
I hope you don't mind me playing around with this shot.
As I wrote in my critique I think the horizon is a bit lopsided to the left. The centre part of the horizon should at least be straight.
And I think a slight adjustment of saturation brings out the contrast better between the vivid colours of the flowers and the fog.
Let me know if this version of your shot works too or not.
Regards,
Britta
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Japan
Title: colors
colors (9)
AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 546 W: 32 N: 50] (6137)

More saturation
More saturation
carifuna07 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 115 W: 1 N: 56] (604) [2008-07-25 01:22:54] [1]
Hi!
A bit more saturation and a frame to finish your beautiful work.
Hope you like it!
Carine
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