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swans and swan-boats (16)
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(6485)

Composition & frame

eyesthetix

(7883) [2008-09-10 02:42:22] [2] [+]

Hi Akihisa,
As I looked at your image i thought it could be made to look more attractive.
I understand that we all have personal preferences - So you may call this my thought ;-)

Details (in Adobe PS) were:
1. Cropped out the top - to focus on the attractive area below.

2. USM + slight colour boost (personal preference here - i think colours in the original were okay).

3. Dark border :-)

Hope you like it

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red rose (16)
AKITA

(6485)

Photoscape

terrileo70

(1150) [2008-08-30 03:47:56] [1]

Lowered the gamma bright
Added contrast
Darkened
Cropped and cloned out the birghtness in the background.

Tracey

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a morning glory (8)
AKITA

(6485)

Crop & edit

tjutjut

(15256) [2008-08-09 18:43:56]

Hi Akihisa san,

Hope you don't mind . .
I crop the image . . and remove some disturbing object . .
I am not the expert doing the edit . . but just to show you the composition that makes the flower stands out . .

Cheers,
Tjutjut

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flowers field (20)
AKITA

(6485)

rotation, adjusting of saturation

Briddl

(537) [2008-07-27 06:08:27] [3]

Hello Akihisa,
I hope you don't mind me playing around with this shot.
As I wrote in my critique I think the horizon is a bit lopsided to the left. The centre part of the horizon should at least be straight.
And I think a slight adjustment of saturation brings out the contrast better between the vivid colours of the flowers and the fog.
Let me know if this version of your shot works too or not.
Regards,
Britta

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