I created more air. Made a tighter crop, smart blur and sharping. Also s abit less saturation.
I tried to get 1/3 2/3 horizon and the ice line into the corner.
In this composition the focus is more on the action. The boy. I think doesn't add much so i clooned the background. Also increased a litle bit the contrast.
An other crop. I removed some spots and used the blur to make the skin smooter. Also removed a hair from the face. I changed the black and white to a bit warmer colour whit red and yellow.
I first removed the spots with a clone tool.
Then I made the eyes lighter.
At the endc a filter Neatimage (freeinternetprogramm) and a bit blur for some spots.
Ik heb de top eraf gelaten het gras stond er maar een beetje op. Rechts ook een deel weg zodat de paaltjes niet meer symetrisch staan. Verder het contrast wat verhoogd.