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Netherlands
Title: Spring = LambsCanon EOS 20D
Spring = Lambs (18)
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335)

crop
crop
atsouth Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 117 W: 34 N: 134] (1131) [2008-05-14 08:40:15] [2]
only cropped from the bottom
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Namibia
Title: Himba WomanCanon EOS 20D
Himba Woman (74) *
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335)

Channel Mixer
Channel Mixer
wbriques Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 175 W: 58 N: 222] (1365) [2008-04-03 04:31:28] [1]
Edwin,
I liked you photo very much, but would like to see it as pure B&W.
Used Channel Mixer and Monochrome option. Played a little with the color layers to get the contrast that I believe was the best for the shot.
Hope you approve and rate.
Cheers,
Wellington
http://www.treklens.com/members/wbriques/photos/
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Namibia
Title: Aloe dichotoma...what's that?Canon EOS 20D
Aloe dichotoma...what's that? (34) *
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335)

Frame?
Frame?
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335) [2008-02-08 15:18:27]
Is this frame more to your liking???

I will be happy to hear your opinions.
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United States
Title: SF Awakenings 2Canon EOS 20D
SF Awakenings 2 (12)
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335)

Brightness adjusted
Brightness adjusted
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335) [2007-12-29 07:16:25] [+]
After reading the critique of GreenBaron that the initial photo was too dark i adjusted brightness.
I see his point; the pic was too dark. I think the WS is a better one.
Feel free to disagree..
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United States
Title: XpressionCanon EOS 20D
Xpression (16)
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335)

A lot of various unsharp masks
A lot of various unsharp masks
Dpbours Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 430 W: 59 N: 398] (2066) [2007-12-22 12:32:26] [1] [+]
I made a number of unsharp mask actions. An action is like a macro. You can record it and play it later on. It's a second tab in the history menu.

I started with an USM+Dark action:
unsharp masking of 150%, 0.3 pix radius and 0 treshold. Then edit - fade to mask at 100% opacity and towards 'darker'.

After that an USM+Light option:
Unsharp masking of 150%, 0.3 pix radius and 0 treshold. Then edit - fade to mask at 100% opacity and towards 'lighter'.

The first one contrasts the dark areas, the second one works on the lighter areas.

After that the curves option. I set the white point in the white of the eye and the dark point in the shadow of the head. Those are the points that set my minimum + maximum tone. All other tones are now set to these reference points.

Last a final unsharp masking of 30%, 0.3 pix and 0 treshold. Hope you like the result!
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United States
Title: SF AwakeningsCanon EOS 20D
SF Awakenings (16)
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335)

Different frame.
Different frame.
perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2905 W: 907 N: 5910] (25940) [2007-12-20 15:15:34] [2]
As the sunrise is coming out of darkness , instead of brightness, I proposeyou a little WS.

No alteration to the scene . Just changed the frame. Also kept the title color warm ( sample from the bay water instaed of bright white ) . Again to emphasize the morning light mood.

Hope you will find it useful.

Cheers!
Robert
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Namibia
Title: Black RhinoCanon EOS 20D
Black Rhino (10)
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335)

cloning
cloning
letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1352 W: 439 N: 1185] (6625) [2006-01-27 15:02:36] [5]
just cloned out the branch in the face ..

Leon
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South Africa
Title: Don't mess with meCanon EOS 20D
Don't mess with me (15)
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335)

adjustments
adjustments
mrcrow Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 453 W: 217 N: 79] (2702) [2005-12-30 11:09:03] [3]
happened to see the other workshop and wonder why more wasnt made of the eyes...which are your winning component in this shot..
OWO you are old!!
i cant remember from one day to the next...63 soon
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South Africa
Title: Don't mess with meCanon EOS 20D
Don't mess with me (15)
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335)

Original photo converted to JPG
Original photo converted to JPG
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335) [2005-12-30 09:09:09]
Play with it, share it and let me learn.
Thnx
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United Kingdom
Title: Elean Donan CastleCanon EOS 20D
Elean Donan Castle (16)
OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335)

Alternative 1
Alternative 1
frank Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 248 W: 18 N: 106] (762) [2005-09-04 07:59:16] [1]
I did a levels correction (just brightened the midtones) and did some unsharp mask (minimum radius, medium setting, low threshold)
I hope you like it, if you prefer your original version please be honest about it. Personally I think that the added sharpness is definitely better, but concerning the brightness, I feel that your version is more sombre, broodier, has maybe more atmosphere, mine is brighter, making the foreground more attractive, but maybe it is too cheerful for your taste...
Cheers
Frank
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