Kit suggested that this photo might work better in B&W. This is not something that occurs for me to do, as I think in color, but i thought it was worth a try. I tweaked levels a little after the conversion to increase contrast. I like the color one better still. What do you think?
Looking at your original, I tried a WS for fun to see more swans. I hope you will like it.
Note I completed the head of the TOP one...
and played a bit to create a 3D effect.
Cheers!
Robert