the original for you, Koh. I don't like the blond hair of that girl next to him, but I like the sunlight on his face. Let me know what you think of it. There is another shot of him on TE.
Nino
I cropped the left side of this picture to put an emphasis on the nice diagonal line of the people on the beach. This brought it to a square format which I also like. I also added a small frame. Let me know what you think.
But as I said, this is just another perspective on your compostion.