Hello Dear Rew
I totally agree with u, u r absolutely right & it gives me chance to correct my mistakes. appreciated
few points I want to mention here.
>> about the "paintbrush" black around the face! well I thought lets try something new. my b ppl like it...its my bad luck that u didnot like it. ok! better luck next time.
>>about eye contact U said that :if it would be more powerful with his eyes towards the camera
He is not a model or not on set of photo shot. I tried to capture a daily life expressing which ppl hides when they see camera VDO/still. I tried to show a something natural, I did not want him to know that im pointing camera towards him otherwise he would get very conscious and I would not b able to get the facial expression.
Here in this part of the world we are living ppl are scared of camera and many of them won't let to portrait them and many gets very conscious and gives very abnormal and unnatural expression when camera is pointed toward them. In Pakistan the literacy rate is very low, life style ppl comes from villages to urban areas to work they've never seen and knows abt camera they get scared.
Also - a couple of 'hot spots' on the side of his face and nose, where the reflected light is too bright and the skin detail has been lost.
Yep accepted my mistake couldn't control the direct sunlight.
Hope U got my point. once again I liked ur critique.
Regards
Usaf |
Pakistan
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Usaf
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