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Wason (310)
B&W version
Edited by:perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 883 N: 6063] (27341)

Another version this time in full B&W.
Of course I increased the size of your photo in order to reframe it like that. Hopefully you could work your original shot with much better result. This way you still have the repetitions of the city lights , and balconies along the boardwalk.

Hope you will like it. Sorry for the poor definition. But it is just to give you the idea.

What do you think ?
Cheers!
Robert

Altered Image #2

Wason (310)
Focus on the subject
Edited by:perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 883 N: 6063] (27341)

The main subject here is this little girl., who is not really in a good mood compared to the lovers, the bunch of friends behind , and the photographer shooting the lovers in the BG.

So I desaturated the whole picture except her. Of course I increased the size of your photo in order to reframe it like that. Hopefully you could work your original shot with much better result. This way you also have the repetitions of the city lights , and balconies along the boardwalk.

Hope you will like it. Sorry for the poor definition. But it is just to give you the idea.

Let me know what you think , OK ?
Cheers!
Robert

Altered Image #1

Wason (310)
Various
Edited by:frappa76 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 201 W: 51 N: 137] (1346)

Hello.
In this simple WS
I cropped a little bit the left side and the bottom.
Turned in B/W.
Added contrast,sharpness,frame
I hope you like it and don't mind...let me know.
Regards, Francesco