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Salmon Fisher (4)
Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2767)
This was taken on a day out I was heading to Lindisfarne but stopped of at a lay-by near the junction pool where the Tweed and Teviot rivers merge. I could not focus on the water bailiff and the man fishing for salmon as the boat was constantly on the move so tried to do my best
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I tried to get the horizon straight in this shot but ended up with the river looking as if it was going uphill so decided to leave as is. I know I will be critiqued harshly because of this but this is a personal choice and I hope that you can understand that. I have done a workshop to show what I mean.

A very Merry Christmas and a Guid New Year to everyone that I have met on this site take care.

Thanks in advance for any critiques and or comments.

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Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2767)
Tried straightening the horizon
Edited by:hifimusicdai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 690 W: 351 N: 840] (5362)
I think the rise in the fg and the widening of the far river bank is deceptive. I also sharpened the picture and added a black frame. I hope you like.
Warm regards
David
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Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2767)
Straightened
Edited by:Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2767)
As you can see I have straightened the horizon but the water is now flowing uphill I personally think it is has ruined what I wanted to achieve in the first place.