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Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 98 N: 3374] (17650) [2010-12-29 1:42]

A lovely colourful shot here Neels. Very eyecatching and interesting. With good composition.

Thanks for sharing,

Regards
Dawn

Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 98 N: 3374] (17650) [2010-12-29 1:41]

Hello Philip,

I certainly like the simiplicity of this shot. A cool early morning shot, looks like it was the start of a nice day. I do like the delicate tones of this photo. Well done.

Regards
Dawn

Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 98 N: 3374] (17650) [2010-12-29 1:38]

Nice nite shot here John, good colours and tones, the blue certainly is eyecatching. And a good leading line photo.. well done.

Cheers
Dawn

Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 98 N: 3374] (17650) [2010-12-29 1:36]

Hello Janice, Interesting to see the way the lady is standing, with her hands on her hips, similar to the scultpure ! And an interesting photo to look at.. as it tells a story, especially with that view. It was a great day out my friend.

Cheers Dawn.

Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 98 N: 3374] (17650) [2010-08-31 17:35]

Those people seem so familiar...lol..

Lovely capture in the wheat field and happy people.. nicely composed..yes freedom to roam. Well done I like it.

TFS
Cheers
Dawn

Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 98 N: 3374] (17650) [2010-08-23 16:09]

Hi Emma... I like monkeys too, they are so fasinating to watch, maybe we relate to them, cos they remind us of ourselves.. hehe.

Good catpure of his expression here, I do feel his face needs to be a tad sharper, did you sharpen this before uploading I wonder ? and yes I do feel like Hans, the space on the left is a bit distracting and could be cropped as per Hans workshop... although it is nice to see a bit of blur, maybe its a bit too much here, as the main subject is the monkey. Good eyecatching colours with the brown, orange and green. I hope you had a fun day.

Best wishes
Dawn

Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 98 N: 3374] (17650) [2010-08-21 13:49]

Hi Emma... This looks an interesting place to explore.. and scenes like this always make good photos... I do think you need to be a little careful with your compostion here... take time when you are composing your shot look all around your view finder to see how you can improve it.. for instance you just chopped a little off the bottom of the gate and it would have been good to have just stepped back a bit and also got the top of the steeples of the church in.. just little things to remember.. but I do like the B and W conversion here. Its intereting to look around such places.. you have so much history there in England.. lucky you.

Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 98 N: 3374] (17650) [2010-08-20 22:38]

Hi Janice.. lovely capture of your son and grandaughter...love both expressions. You are so good at quickly capturing such photos..I would still be wondering which way to take it! Great sharpness, well done. And thanks for showing the photo in the workshop, im sure your family will be taking lots of visits there now. :-)

Kindest regards
Dawn

Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 98 N: 3374] (17650) [2010-08-19 15:48]

Nice work Emma.. I like the DOF with the OOF flowers in the BG.. well done.. nice colours too.

CHeers my friend
Dawn
p.s good title too.

Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 98 N: 3374] (17650) [2010-08-16 17:13]

Hi Emma, nice flower, pretty colour. The shot is a little soft for my liking, but then not everything has to be super sharp when it comes to taking photos of flowers.

You need to upload in a bigger size Emma, to crop this one in a workshop for a better composition, wouldnt work too well because it would look a little to small. But do try yourself to play around with different crops going in closer etc.

Have you managed to download photofiltre yet ? I would truely recommend it for easy use.

Best regards
Dawn