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Title: Red
Red (2)
mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 463 W: 66 N: 1002] (10438)

Great

appalcarp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1116 W: 154 N: 633] (4198) [2016-12-03 19:41]

Well done, good subject focus, colors beautiful.

appalcarp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1116 W: 154 N: 633] (4198) [2016-12-03 19:39]

Nice atmosphere, good backdrop, family-oriented, well focused and shot. Good rule of thirds.

appalcarp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1116 W: 154 N: 633] (4198) [2016-12-03 19:37]

Where do we begin? Out of focus, faded too much, petals cut off on top, no rule of thirds. It could have been great.

appalcarp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1116 W: 154 N: 633] (4198) [2016-12-03 19:32]

I like this because I live in the woods/farms and love nature. I see age, trauma, the process of wounds and degradation as wood dies and transforms. Being angled it looks ready to fall.

appalcarp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1116 W: 154 N: 633] (4198) [2016-12-03 19:29]

I would say use rule of thirds for your subject. All in all it is dark and hard to see and would have benefited from hdr or flash.

appalcarp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1116 W: 154 N: 633] (4198) [2016-12-03 18:00] [+]

Lol. Gave me a good laugh.

appalcarp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1116 W: 154 N: 633] (4198) [2016-12-03 17:53]

Dynamite pic! Good pov and all of it. Colors totally entrancing. Would like to show it off on my fb page.

appalcarp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1116 W: 154 N: 633] (4198) [2016-12-03 17:50]

I like this, either a flash fill or hdr might have filled it in a bit. (or .raw).

appalcarp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1116 W: 154 N: 633] (4198) [2009-09-04 21:13]

This is well-captured, well-done, good lighting. High ISO did give a bit of noise to the back but the front ladies came out, well, picture perfect. TFS Cropping out or fuzzing the bg (darkened girls) might have been nice. TFS I have this camera and a similar lens though mine is IS USM which helps with an f-stop or two either way so I know it's capabilities.

appalcarp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1116 W: 154 N: 633] (4198) [2009-09-04 21:07]

I appreciate the circumstances of the shot, but this is an example where a careful pp would have done well to soften the overexposed face and give a bit more light to the shadowed areas. Midday is not the best time, but towards evening or early morning works great. Love her youthful expression. TFS