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bc_the_path Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 5] (163) [2010-08-05 13:24]

This is just beautiful!
The red shoes, by the way, carries the composition into a higher level.

bc_the_path Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 5] (163) [2010-07-13 13:43] [+]

A lovely, strong portrait. Perhaps you should also try a monochrome as well...

bc_the_path Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 5] (163) [2010-07-11 5:58]

A nice play of colors.
I agree with SunToucher about the composition.
Since you can not probably "uncrop" the feet, you may perhaps consider decreasing the negative space a bit.

bc_the_path Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 5] (163) [2010-05-02 23:53] [+]

I think this may look more dramatic with a different post processing.
(I understand you have aimed at something else).
Now we only have the drama of the subject matter; still very strong...

bc_the_path Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 5] (163) [2010-04-09 13:45]

I agree with chocolate29.
I wouyd also suggest suggest filling more of the frame with the baby and putting the mother to the background. I lower angle and a position close to the baby can do the trick.
Best wishes to you all.

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bc_the_path Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 5] (163) [2010-04-05 0:29]

This reminds me of my country :)
One can hear the flow of water down below the trees...

bc_the_path Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 5] (163) [2010-03-27 14:30]

Insan bunun icinde kayboluyor...
Gozumuzun onundeki zenginlik...
Saygilar,

Bulent

bc_the_path Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 5] (163) [2010-03-27 13:44]

"You are not still angry with me, are you?"

bc_the_path Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 5] (163) [2010-03-25 14:01] [+]

The highlight detail is superb.
The composition and -more importantly- the "feel" deserves a re-scan to show more shadow detail, I think.

Regards,

Bulent

bc_the_path Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 5] (163) [2010-03-23 14:34] [+]

Thanks for the info. The selective desaturation seems to have worked nicely for this image.
I wonder if you would consider something (cropping, toning etc) to darken the rather too bright upper right part.
Regards,

Bulent