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pitai Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 63 W: 2 N: 31] (704) [2007-06-11 18:24]

very nice close up. clear and sharp. i like the contrast with the background and the ray of light over the flower. well done.

pitai Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 63 W: 2 N: 31] (704) [2007-06-06 21:00] [+]

Hello Paulo, When I see this picture I feel so much peace. I am not sure where you took this image from, but It does look like a reflection in the water. Simple composition, but visually so powerful. Well done.
Best regards, Gabriel

pitai Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 63 W: 2 N: 31] (704) [2007-06-06 20:54] [+]

Hello Cal,

Nature is so magic... Your note was so informative...

About the picture I agree the flash is a bit too strong. I have been told that a peace of wax paper could work as a diffuser.

Regardless of that, I like your picture. Fantastic details!

TFS

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lilimih33 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2852 W: 613 N: 3000] (19483)

Great

pitai Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 63 W: 2 N: 31] (704) [2007-06-06 20:48]

A very fine work Lili,

I like it, soft and calm. Somehow it does remind me a wallpaper pattern.


Nice Done!

pitai Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 63 W: 2 N: 31] (704) [2007-06-06 20:43]

Oi Lurdes,

I just have one word for this compo: POWERFUL! Great colors, and contrast. The arrangement of the flowers is so balance and creates a beautiful image. Congrats!

pitai Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 63 W: 2 N: 31] (704) [2007-06-06 20:40] [+]

Oi Lurdes,

I am sorry about your cat. It's good to hear he is doing ok now. Let's just hope he had learn something good about this experience.

I like your composition. Is real, and reflects your feelings about this moment. In one way it does connects you with the audience in a more personal level.

On the other hand, I am glad you included a picture of yourself. It's nice to meet you.

pitai Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 63 W: 2 N: 31] (704) [2007-06-06 20:32]

Hola Roberto, interesante composición. La mariposa esta excelentemente capturada. Bien definida y con colores bien saturados. Y bueno ese cuadrado de fondo llama poderosamente la atención, que una vez mas nos lleva la vista a la mariposa. Existe una pequeña falla en el fondo a la derecha. Pero, realmente, nada que tenga mucha importancia. Buen trabajo!

pitai Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 63 W: 2 N: 31] (704) [2007-06-04 3:22] [+]

Eu acho que este é mesmo um olhar que mata. hehehee.

Ao final quantos olhos as aranhas tem? 8 ?

Por outro lado, nunca tinha visto uma aranha verde. Bom trabalho!

pitai Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 63 W: 2 N: 31] (704) [2007-06-04 3:20] [+]

Oi Paulo,

O DOF é um bocado fraco, mais gostei muito do ponto de vista. E acho que pelo tamanho da flor, o insecto devia ter sido mesmo minúsculo.

TFS.

pitai Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 63 W: 2 N: 31] (704) [2007-06-04 3:15]

Oi Lurdes,
Os lagartos são tão complicados de fotografar. O que mais gosto da tua composição, é o efeito que a moldura faz. Parece que temos o lagarto a sair dela. Nice..