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royce10 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 17] (213) [2005-02-02 14:24]

lovely colors. i agree with the other comments. try not to use the flash when it comes to outdoor scenic shots. the silhouettes of the trees in the foreground works well.

royce10 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 17] (213) [2005-02-02 13:59]

another beautiful shot. great lighting.

royce10 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 17] (213) [2005-02-02 13:57]

absolutely beautiful shot. the color, the lighting, the composition, just so well done. looking forward to more of your photos.

royce10 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 17] (213) [2005-01-30 16:52]

great shot. the dof was done very well. the raindrops on the petals came out nicely. well done.

royce10 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 17] (213) [2005-01-30 16:50]

i agree with the previous post. was there a purpose to the tilt? sometimes photographers shoot a particular shot at an angle in order to highlight a unique perspective. this night shot does look nice but there are a couple of things that could be done to make it even better. first i would level the horizon. then i would crop out alot of the dark sky above. i know there are a few stars here and there but alot of it is just dark space. by cropping that part of the picture out and keeping it wide, you turn it into a panoramic looking shot. give it a try and see how it turns out.

royce10 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 17] (213) [2005-01-30 16:35] [+]

beautiful pic. if this is the view you have from your living room, then life must be pretty good. as far as the color mixing. it can be alot of fun and enhance your photos greatly. i understand where you are going with this color but i think it was just over done. color adjustment is best when it is subtle. too heavy handed and it overwhelms the photo. a neat trick i've learned is to take a photo in black and white, or just desaturate the original color photo. the add a light touch of blue. just a bit. it gives the black color more depth. looking forward to more of your photos!

royce10 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 17] (213) [2005-01-30 16:26]

interesting shot. i actually liked the shadows of the leaves on the wall more than the rest of the photo. the black and white captures them well.

royce10 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 17] (213) [2005-01-30 16:07]

interesting shot. the colors of the oil in the water were very well captured. well done.

royce10 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 17] (213) [2005-01-30 16:04] [+]

interesting composition. i didn't understand it until i read your explanation. i think that the dark silhouete of the statue in front of the orange/pink clouds was composed well. my only suggestion is the level the horizon. it's titled.

royce10 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 17] (213) [2005-01-30 16:02]

beautiful sunset. my only suggestion is if you could have shown the fishermen more. i noticed two in the distance. i think that their darkened silhouettes would have looked
great. sometimes you can play with the contrast/brightness to achieve a better silhouete shot. well done.