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vera Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 13] (250) [2005-12-04 20:03]

Love it! It really captures the mood.

vera Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 13] (250) [2005-02-21 13:52]

Hi Glen
I like this photo for its photojournalistic appeal. It makes a real statment for me about how these young people feel. If the colors were less saturated it would give it an older feel leaving one think it was even taken in the 60's. Somethings change, others never change.

vera Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 13] (250) [2005-02-19 11:55] [+]

I really like the coloring of the flag. Gives it a feeling of being old. If I were to change anything, I would have cropped it closer. I don't think the top of the flag post adds to the picture and I would like to see more of the flag in the frame. Thanks for sharing.
Vera

vera Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 13] (250) [2005-02-19 11:47] [+]

I think her tongue says alot too.

vera Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 13] (250) [2005-02-19 11:26]

How cute is that. I like the effect. I guess if I were to change one thing, it would be to crop that bottom shadow out. It looks like the shadow from your head which often happens when you use a flash.
Thanks for sharing.
Vera

vera Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 13] (250) [2005-02-19 11:16]

Very interesting combination. You have really achieved the "ghost ship" feel. I may lighten just ever so slightly the cloud around the mast...to the right so the part of the sail stands out a little bit more. That is being picky. Thanks for sharing.

vera Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 13] (250) [2005-02-19 11:10]

Very interesting photo. From a composition point of view, I would like to see a little more of the man on the left. So I guess just not cropped so tightly. For me, it is the person and their motion that makes the picture interesting. Thanks for sharing!
Vera

vera Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 13] (250) [2005-02-14 11:19]

I really like this. The cat looks so soft and the girls eye make up quit harsh. The pose is like they are clinging to one another. Nice bw. Thanks for sharing.

vera Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 13] (250) [2005-02-14 9:40] [+]

Hi there
I really love what you have done with this photo. I am drawn into the picture, leaving with a feeling of tranquility. It is so simple. Bravo...hope I can learn from you!