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dorisday Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 50 N: 146] (2039) [2009-07-07 2:22]

Very nicely executed shot, a wee bit of motion blur might have convinced me that he was really moving. I guess you will have seen the series of images featuring models like these by Man Ray? Only his models had action of a different kind......

Karen

dorisday Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 50 N: 146] (2039) [2009-07-07 2:14]

Hi Santhosh,

I like the idea, nice and minimal. I think you would have a more dramatic composition if you placed the boat off centre, a bit of cropping would achieve this. Also, the white burn't out are at the top of the screen distracts my eye. This also could be cropped out.

Karen

dorisday Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 50 N: 146] (2039) [2009-07-07 2:12]

This is beautifully sharp, and I love the purply colours. Well shot.

Karen

dorisday Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 50 N: 146] (2039) [2009-07-07 1:44]

Hi,

This is great street photography, you have the main people in focus, a little bit of movement and good tonal range. I love these kind of photos, the more photography I take the more I am drawn to images with interesting people in them.

Well done, and thanks for the comments on my photos.
Karen

dorisday Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 50 N: 146] (2039) [2008-12-05 17:35] [+]

Hello my friend!

This is a lovely moment to have captured.
I think you could crop out some of the right side of the image to make a square format and get rid of the little distracting leaves.
Nice light on their faces.
Karen

dorisday Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 50 N: 146] (2039) [2008-12-04 0:25]

Good postcard but the stamp??
Now THAT is a work of art.
Doris xx

dorisday Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 50 N: 146] (2039) [2008-12-04 0:23]

Hi Kayce,
Welcome to TL.
A good angle of view, lots of nice detail in the foreground but this is lost a bit as you get to the top of the building. I don't know if you can alter settings on your camera but a f stop of 11 or more may have give you that edge.
I look forward to seeing more of your postings.
Karen

dorisday Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 50 N: 146] (2039) [2008-12-04 0:20]

Aha, a digital convert.
You have come over to the dark side.
This is a great shot. Good action and motion but clarity around the head of the bird, plenty of space for it to 'fly' into, good DOF and that little bit of red adds the impact needed to raise it from the flat lighting.
Great post Steven and welcome to TL.
Karen

dorisday Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 50 N: 146] (2039) [2008-12-04 0:11] [+]

Hello Srinivasa,
Welcome to Trek Lens. This is a lovely image, good composition and focus, and nicely exposed for the light. I like your note.
Karen

dorisday Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 50 N: 146] (2039) [2008-12-04 0:08]

Merhaba Kemal,
Welcome to TrekLens.
Good first posting. An interesting point of view with good focus on the people in the cafe which for me make the shot better than if it were just tea. You could crop about half of the sudoku out as I don't think you need it all.
I just love Istanbul and this reminds me of my visits there.
Karen