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oochappan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 12 N: 45] (400) [2005-10-12 20:45] [+]

Indeed like a abstract pastel, subject and colors are excellent.

oochappan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 12 N: 45] (400) [2005-08-09 22:33] [+]

A nice one too, more colorfull, you must see them indeed together, in that way they upvalue each other.
Henk

oochappan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 12 N: 45] (400) [2005-08-08 13:11]

Right
sober does it always very good
and
you aim straight to target
no distracting
I like this one even more then your first
that was already a strong start
Excellent and thanks Sandip

oochappan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 12 N: 45] (400) [2005-08-08 10:22]

The only thing is that as such it doesn't give immediatly the impression of a photo-book, but if the tracks were spread over several photos in white then the photos are spotted again, the layout as such is a nice related eyepuller to tracks of railways, indeed.
Why not using some photos of Cesar to center as he started the dream and he is still the original radiating power that grows with all our support......
Thanks Torben for your incredible creativity.

oochappan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 12 N: 45] (400) [2005-08-06 21:05]

I like this original idea a lot, you are very creative indeed. A good way to break through a pure white background.

I think that every participant of the book should put a vote here on TL by favorising it, that would give a serious hint for the final decission.

Henk

oochappan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 12 N: 45] (400) [2005-08-04 3:55]

Hi Curtis
you are doing a hell of a fine job here, bringing ideas together in new settings to show how ideas can be molded, I think on the last run we have to start to make options .... do we restrict ourself to the material of TE itself or do we induce other elements ?
Inducing other elements will make our choice indeed harder.

oochappan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 12 N: 45] (400) [2005-08-03 6:52]

It will be hard to choose and indeed Francis brought us to other ideas, maybe background a slight differant colortone .... I like that you maintain the sober tendens that even in your first layout was to find.
Photos to spot out can always be chosen by vote but I tend certainly not to miss one of Cesar for his creative dream that gave us already a lot of fun.

oochappan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 12 N: 45] (400) [2005-08-03 6:46]

Very colorfull and another way to include the world map, nicely done and a good enlarging draft.

oochappan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 12 N: 45] (400) [2005-07-31 15:12]

A very innovating idea, Torben, to be worked adjusting tiny things like background, restricting to submitted photos but this can only be done when the submissions are closed.
Certainly an excellent contribution of creative thinking, hoping that this could challenge others still, altough this will be hard to beat, that's for sure.
Thanks a lot and keep on to it.
Henk

oochappan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 12 N: 45] (400) [2005-07-25 5:11]

EXCELLLENT Curtis
now we are talking .... another one hard to beat
this would even good on a white background,
the idea is perfect ! coloribus non disputantum ...
This layou can be used easily on portrait/landscape or square models.