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Good sports action shot of a difficult subject, these guys wont wait while you adjust your camera, well done.
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Excellent. Is it wrong to write a long rambling essay about a minimalist shot?
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Hi, well exposed shot keeping detail in all areas. Foreground interest provide by the bails of straw and great detail in clouds.
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Welcome to TL. This is a wonderful journalistic shot, a capture that says so much. Taken in the most difficult of locations, congratulations on an excellent contribution to TL.
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Simple fun with your camera, quite surreal. Would a smaller aperture to bring both girls into the same focus have worked? Worth a try? Phil.
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Hi Excellent exposure of a difficult subject, good use of HDR to present a photograph that is readable throughout.
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Hi, for me a tad over exposed but captures the banality of the area captured well. Phil.
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Hi, excellent entry, the texture of the metal and the knurled edge is captured well. Regards Phil.
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Hi, the grain gives the shot an eerie almost Hitchcockesque atmosphere, we like it. Phil.
I would have either cropped the top off or cloned a few pairs of shoes into the top to make it 100% shoes, that's my take on what is an excellent contribution to TL.