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Helkoryo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1577 W: 203 N: 4941] (22130) [2008-11-26 6:26]

Hello Ron

I think this shot is really superb. The lighting is nice and warm, DOF is absoltuely perfect as the lady in the FG is razor sharp but you also held the details in the BG. Lovely post my friend.

TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen

Helkoryo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1577 W: 203 N: 4941] (22130) [2008-11-26 6:24]

Hiya Linda

Absolutely wondeful, nice and cheerful with excellent lighting and a neatly balanced shot too.

TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen

Helkoryo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1577 W: 203 N: 4941] (22130) [2008-11-26 6:23]

Hello Lisa

A lvoely bright cheerful smile there, nicely captured with good lighting and detail.

TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen

Helkoryo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1577 W: 203 N: 4941] (22130) [2008-11-21 9:12] [+]

Hello Di

A lovely sharp image here with excellent colour saturation, I love photographing birds of prey. Your angle on this one is unusual but extreemly effective. well done

TFS regards Helen

Helkoryo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1577 W: 203 N: 4941] (22130) [2008-11-21 8:54]

Hello Pamela

Welcome to TL. I spotted your image had the word smile in the title and as thats the title of this weeks theme I took the liberty of adding your shot to the theme.

Keep an eye in the forums I open a theme every thursday (uk time) for members to post a specific style or titled image.

I think this shot is delightful. The catchlight (shiny parts) in her eyes are just right nice and sharp and she is looking straight into the lens. Her smile is warm and natural.

Yes you could make some slight improvments here maybe shes a tad to central and the additional hair showing is slightly distracting but you have made the effort to add notes to your posting which in my book counts for a lot.

TFS and I will see if I can do you a workshop to show how you could give small improvement to this image

kind regards Helen

Helkoryo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1577 W: 203 N: 4941] (22130) [2008-11-21 8:47] [+]

Hello Willemein

LOL yes indeed this did really make me smile. she looks as though she is trying very hard and having lots of fun. I like the angle of this shot and your detail and colour saturation is excellent.

TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen

Helkoryo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1577 W: 203 N: 4941] (22130) [2008-11-21 8:46]

Hello Eman

Nicely suited to B/W here and more central than ususal portraits, however i think that works well too as he is looking square into the lens, nice sharp detail and it seems you have done a lot of PP work here but in my opion the result is very effective.

TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen

Helkoryo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1577 W: 203 N: 4941] (22130) [2008-11-21 8:44] [+]

hello John

A nice capture here and indeed she does have a warm smile. Your image sharp with excellent eye contact. I like your notes too.

TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen

Helkoryo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1577 W: 203 N: 4941] (22130) [2008-11-21 8:42]

Hello Dot

Haha yes indeed I love her smiley smock! A nicely angled shot and the light does give an interesting eiry (not sure on spelling) feel to the image.

TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen

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Ramdan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 688 W: 31 N: 1408] (5765)

Great

Helkoryo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1577 W: 203 N: 4941] (22130) [2008-11-21 8:40]

hello Ramdan

that smile looks like its about to change to fits of giggles. What a lovely portrait, nicely composed and well balanced with good colour saturation too.

TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen