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Mexico
Title: FrisbeeCanon EOS 7 D
Frisbee (6)
Balzac Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 57 W: 42 N: 109] (1367)


Great

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2019-01-03 1:44]
A moment well caught.

United States
Title: Parapluie
Parapluie (4)
clic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 728 W: 0 N: 107] (2973)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2019-01-03 1:43]
I like this. Nice composition and colour on the clouds

Denmark
Title: Wasting TimeLeica V-Lux 4
Wasting Time (3)
mrmike1935 Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 213] (4506)


Good

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2019-01-03 1:39] [+]
Classic point and shoot composition with the girl in the middle. Perhaps the message in your note could have ben made stronger if she was looking 'in to something' or as the case with your note, looking in to 'nothing'. Sharpness and focus is good and the overcast has created even light with no harsh shadows. I would have preferred if she did not have her eyes closed, maybe even looking tin to the camera or past the camera (as an alternative to above suggestions)

United Kingdom
Title: Eden Project rope viewOlympus E-300
Eden Project rope view (6)
HuubWisse Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 18] (261)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2019-01-03 1:34]
I like the view point you have chosen. It is a bit different.

France
Title: the girl with a red bag
the girl with a red bag (16)
daisydaisy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1518 W: 111 N: 1055] (5868)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2019-01-03 1:33]
Its nice light and composition on this. I like how you have captured the stance of the girl and that you get a glimpse of what is going on behind the corner.

United States
Title: SadnessCanon 40D
Sadness (10) *
jimmyjimmy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1324 W: 566 N: 9] (85)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2019-01-03 1:32]
Its a nice capture with nice contrast. Good focus on the eyes and the structure of the fur comes out really well.

India
Title: VictimNikon Coolpix P900
Victim (3)
biswarup Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 45 W: 0 N: 94] (1667)


Good

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2018-12-06 3:09]
Lovely and sharp with a very sad back story

Brazil
Title: Emerging Two
Emerging Two (3)
mesquens1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2632 W: 147 N: 2136] (40773)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2018-12-06 3:04] - [workshop] [compare] [+]
Hi Raimundo, I like the general idea of what you are trying to achieve and the composition kind of works with the statue of Christ positioned in a good place. The issues I see (in my humble opinion) with the end result are colour balance and contrast. The image has too much cyan and green colour for the clouds to really stand out. The statue almost blend in with the clouds in the lower right hand side of the image as the colours are very similar and there is not a lot of contrast. I will see if I can manage to upload a workshop for you. I use Lightroom and Photoshop CS. I would keep up with this idea and perhaps next time use a polarisation filter to bring out the structure of the clouds some more.

Bulgaria
Title: Lips N Roses
Lips N Roses (6)
mirmar (33)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2016-07-08 0:42]
I really like this Mirella. Beautiful, soft and mysterious. Yes one can easily see the formation of the petals and how they resemble a pair of lips. I very much like the dark background. It would have been so easily to make the background white and bright but the black really enhances the softness. Makes it very feminine. Well done.

Canada
Title: Little Birdie in the Tree!Nikon D60
Little Birdie in the Tree! (4)
PhilippeC (105)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2016-07-07 7:20]
Pretty bird. I agree with Jonathan that a tighter crop would be good. Perhaps it would benefit from a slight off centre position Have the bird look into the frame. you could try in in a photo editing program

Poland
Title: Summer in the countryside
Summer in the countryside (4)
luciola Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 166 W: 0 N: 20] (1192)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2016-07-07 6:52]
Country side is lovely. You have good contrast and Depth of Field and very little to distract the eye away from the main focal point. What you could try is to frame the picture a bit differently. Rather then having the object in the centre, in this case I would suggest an off-centre position, with the cows more to the right in the picture and more landscape to the left. This will create a diagonal line and make it appear as if the cows are looking into the landscape. It is not much one can do about an overcast sky but if you have an opportunity to take a similar picture during the early morning of afternoon on a sunny day it would be well worth it.

United States
Title: Hake Brush
Hake Brush (1)
mirmar (33)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2016-07-07 6:44]
The focal point, DoF, saturation and contrast are all fine. The one thing which distract me is the line of shade going down from the brush in the middle of the picture. If it is possible to move the brush so that you can exclude this you will have a winner.

Canada
Title: Magical Keyboard Ride
Magical Keyboard Ride (30)
OeilMagique Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 802 W: 80 N: 58] (308)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2010-10-15 1:37]
Very cool too!

Canada
Title: Keyboards & Software
Keyboards & Software (30) *
OeilMagique Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 802 W: 80 N: 58] (308)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2010-10-15 1:36]
Great job! Really like what you did on his one

United Kingdom
Title: Working HandsCanon EOS 50D
Working Hands (28) *
bri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 13 N: 1404] (6384)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2010-10-15 1:03]
Really love this low key shot. I have to tell my friend to bring me along when her horse need new shoes ;) Great composition too. The smoke adds drama together with the low key. Great job!

United Kingdom
Title: Caught!Canon 350D Digital Rebel
Caught! (15)
bri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 13 N: 1404] (6384)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2010-10-15 1:00] [+]
What a lucky shoot Brian! Really nice. If it wasn't for the slight grain/blur it would have made a great print. Might still be nice as a print though. If nothing else, a nice memory! The light on the dear is very nice. What was your focal length? I never have my camera with me when these things happen...

Canada
Title: first snowPentax Digital *ist
first snow (17)
atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 597 W: 746 N: 637] (3826)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2010-10-14 6:33]
Following suite on my former critique. this is a good example of what i mention i felt was lacking. Here we can see what has caught the attention of the dogs which makes the photo more interesting.

Canada
Title: attentionPentax Digital *ist
attention (5)
atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 597 W: 746 N: 637] (3826)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2010-10-14 6:29]
Hi Denis,

Former speakers are correct in that he do stand out against the blue background. However, since the background per say is quite uninteresting i would have preferred to see a bit more of the face of the dog. Now i don't know what the dog is looking at, what has caught his attention etc. Had their been some kind of landscape or an object the composition would have been more interesting. Now i am wondering, what is so fascinating... Exposure etc are all good, I just find it lacking a bit in the composition.

Canada
Title: ChoupettePentax Digital *ist
Choupette (11)
atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 597 W: 746 N: 637] (3826)


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zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246) [2010-10-14 5:14]
Hi Denis,

I am sorry to read you lost your little darling. It is always hart breaking when pets move on... Sure was a cute one and i can see the playfulness in her eye. You did very well with the exposure, getting both the white and the black right. job well done!

Malaysia
Title: Rock ClimberCanon 40D
Rock Climber (12)
Rabani Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 69 W: 0 N: 259] (977)


Great

freddd Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 322 W: 47 N: 77] (1909) [2008-06-01 20:09]
great point of view with excellent sharpness make a nice sport picture.
intense