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Photo Critique
Japan
Title: Kimono GirlCanon 1Ds Mark III
Kimono Girl (6)
wr1611 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 7 N: 22] (177)


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mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2018-11-12 15:01]
Hi,

I like the background for this portrait.
Maybe it would have been nice to have the shade on the background be more clearly visible.

-Pedro

United States
Title: Gleam
Gleam (4)
Migelo (34)


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mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2018-11-12 14:42]
Hi,

I like the colours and dreamy feeling of the gleam.
Maybe you could have moved a bit closer to one of these people to put them more visible in the foreground.

-Pedro

Canada
Title: Car - 2018 - 8Nikon D7100
Car - 2018 - 8 (1)
pierrefonds Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 442 W: 3 N: 1323] (4865)


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mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2018-11-12 14:32]
Hi,

I like the lines and the shiny surface.
I don't like how the bumper is falling off and how the angle is just barely off-center.

-Pedro

United States
Title: San Diego Pier
San Diego Pier (1)
Migelo (34)


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mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2018-11-12 14:27]
Hi,

When shooting with a relatively wide angle like this, a big part of the image is in the foreground. You would do well to look for some interesting object to fill that part of the frame. That way you create more depth and it also makes for a more interesting shot.

-Pedro

Denmark
Title: AssistedLeica V-Lux 4
Assisted (3)
mrmike1935 Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 213] (4544)


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mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2018-11-12 14:23] [+]
Hi,

The composition looks very tight, at least at the front of the bike it feels like it needs a bit more space.

Looking at the background, maybe I would have tried a shot where the man would be completely in front of the wall, making it look like he is in camouflage. Perhaps making it black and white would then enhance that effect.

-Pedro

United States
Title: Sunflower for Tricia
Sunflower for Tricia (2)
lisapw1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 778 W: 102 N: 1602] (8893)


 

GreenBaron Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3009 W: 919 N: 12213] (52777) [2016-07-26 0:36]
Thank you LIsa, a nice tribute for our photo friend Tricia. May she rest in peace!

United States
Title: In Memory of Tricia TreenCanon REBEL XTi
In Memory of Tricia Treen (4)
captainsgirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 862 W: 47 N: 1539] (7132)


 

Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3204 W: 262 N: 7964] (34497) [2016-07-25 19:04]
Lovely photo for Tricia - thanks Donna
Good memories of being TL and also FB with Tricia.
Janice xxx

United States
Title: Farewell to Tricia TreenCanon EOS 30D
Farewell to Tricia Treen (2)
shelbeesmom Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4128 W: 1096 N: 12722] (58278)


 

GreenBaron Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3009 W: 919 N: 12213] (52777) [2016-07-25 14:42]
Farewel Tricia. We met here at TL, will remember you and your family!

United States
Title: In Memory of Tricia TreenCanon REBEL XTi
In Memory of Tricia Treen (4)
captainsgirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 862 W: 47 N: 1539] (7132)


 

GreenBaron Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3009 W: 919 N: 12213] (52777) [2016-07-25 14:40] [+]
Thank you Donna for this wonderful memory of Tricia!

Canada
Title: the good wifePentax K10D
the good wife (18) *
jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 776 W: 26 N: 808] (9426)


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Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3204 W: 262 N: 7964] (34497) [2016-02-15 11:02]
Hello Mrs Jackal!!

New Zealand
Title: Janice's pierPentax K10D
Janice's pier (14)
jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 776 W: 26 N: 808] (9426)


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Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3204 W: 262 N: 7964] (34497) [2016-02-15 11:00] [+]
Hey Jack - long time no see!!
Daisy told me you had posted this so I have come back to visit...
I moved from Murrays Bay last year and I am missing the beach and wharf and the views!! But I am at Settlers in Albany now. Slowly settling in!
AND I am still taking photos
Say Hi to your lovely wife from me
Janice

Malta
Title: Abstract architectureCanon PowerShot G12
Abstract architecture (16)
fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2953 W: 139 N: 7397] (41704)


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zomik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 56 N: 314] (3599) [2014-01-07 3:01]
Very nice impression :) The fine view, the great composition and beautiful colours.
best regards
Zofia

Italy
Title: Sagrantino
Sagrantino (38)
Silvio2006 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4577 W: 106 N: 6071] (54737)


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zomik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 56 N: 314] (3599) [2014-01-07 2:55]
So nice wiev :) and interesting notes.
tfs
best regards
Zofia

Canada
Title: a night in Niagara city
a night in Niagara city (20)
imageme Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 160 W: 0 N: 80] (1241)


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zomik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 56 N: 314] (3599) [2014-01-07 2:09]
The fine view, the great composition. The very good sharpness and the light. TFS
Zofia

United Kingdom
Title: Heaven on EarthLumix DMC G 3
Heaven on Earth (34)
suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)


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zomik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 56 N: 314] (3599) [2014-01-07 2:05]
The gold corn, cool :) well done.
Zofia

South Africa
Title: Red Hot.Canon Digital EOS 40D
Red Hot. (18)
Jonathan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 820 W: 0 N: 376] (13973)


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zomik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 56 N: 314] (3599) [2014-01-07 1:59]
The super macro instruction, the unusual frame and the colour which is giving the uncanny impression .

Poland
Title: PoplarsNikon D70
Poplars (24)
rychem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 736 W: 13 N: 634] (21244)


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limba3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1035 W: 476 N: 576] (16751) [2013-11-07 10:07]
witaj
Bardzo ładna aleja, jak będę blisko to wpadnę do Magnic, by ją sfotografować.
Pozdrawiam
Anna

Poland
Title: Sleeping butterfliesNikon D70
Sleeping butterflies (12)
rychem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 736 W: 13 N: 634] (21244)


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Iwon Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 162 W: 0 N: 99] (8183) [2013-09-02 12:38]
Pięknie się komponują Twoje motylki...
Pozdrawiam
Iwona

Poland
Title: PoppyNikon D70
Poppy (12)
rychem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 736 W: 13 N: 634] (21244)


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Iwon Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 162 W: 0 N: 99] (8183) [2013-08-28 11:17]
Piękny poppy :-)
pozdrawiam
Iwona

Poland
Title: Patrouille SuisseCanon 40 D
Patrouille Suisse (8)
ShurikenPL_ (97)


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Iwon Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 162 W: 0 N: 99] (8183) [2013-08-28 6:31]
Witaj!
Synchronizacja...:-) świetnie złapana latająca trójca... u mnie tych latających jest trochę więcej:-)
pozdrawiam
Iwona