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Copyright: Danielle Dupre (ddupre2) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 457 W: 61 N: 215] (8136)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-10-11
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/4, 1/30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Travelogue: Madagascar
Date Submitted: 2010-11-05 1:31
Viewed: 2601
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
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One of the beautiful smile of the year all the best an amazing portrait also the lights and deails are great well done DANIELLE DUPRE.

Good Morning Danielle,

The expression on this boy's face, lifts the heart! You have captured wonderful light in his eyes, whilst the light and shade work very well.
My only little grumble is the composition.
The vertical wood, behind him, makes a natural frame, whilst he is having to compete for attention with the diagonal strut,and it also leads out of the frame. I have done a w/s to demonstrate what I mean, which I hope you will like.
The portrait of the little boy still deserves full marks.

Have a good day,
Bev :-)

Beautiful portrait of a beautiful boy! Very nice side light. I felt though, that there was maybe a little too much space beside him. I do like the workshop that Bev has done. I believe it brings a lot more attention to this beautiful face.
Well done

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