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Copyright: Henk van Dyk (henkv) (35)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2013-06-17
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 5D Mark II, Canon 24-70mm F2.8 L
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/160 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2013-11-29 1:42
Viewed: 1211
Points: 5
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Ballerina in an abandoned factory
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Hi Henk,
Always great settings balancing soft beauty of the ballerina and the old hard unused structures.Nice soft skin tone and good eye contact, she is extremely beautiful. Eye catching, well presented.

Great shot technically speaking. I'm not fond of your choice of location however. They don't fit together, round peg, square hole. I understand the attempt you made, I feel you fell short!

Great camera setup and lighting. Keep shooting please!

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  • [2013-12-07 14:33]

Hi Henk, good subject, location and lighting. I like the concept of hard location, against the softer ballerina. Where I think the shot could be improved is that the ballerina is static, I think the shot needs to show her moving, this would improve the shot immensely. Kindest regards, Paul.

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